Reviews for The Twins of Fiery Ice
Allysarian chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
I like this - the angsty devotion with the tint of desperation, and lots of love. The repitition is a bit much, though. You might want to consider only repeating your main lines every two or three stanzas, otherwise it's a bit overwhelming and doesn't really flow. That's just my thoughts, though. They're your poems, and they really are quite nice already _