Reviews for dominateing hermione
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Love them all but next time add. A couple more death eaters because hermione needs lucuis and his father also severus and the dark lord filthy mublood
JustThatGirlWhoNoOneKnows chapter 2 . 5/8/2014
You should continue this, just take more care with your grammar
elyon777 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
No offense really but you need to get a beta your spelling is really bad but on the other hand great start!
Bobblies chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
nice beginning, but might wanna get your grammar and spelling sorted or some people arent going to read it :( nice start, update soon :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Love the story so far
Astrolica chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Hey, great story idea, I just love the hermione/fernir pairings, but I've noticed that you sort of struggle with spelling, which makes it hard to read. My advice would be to get yourself a beta, and if you can't find one, I'd be happy to help. Love the story, Astro
DrGinger35 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Ok, gr8 story, HORRIBLE GRAMMAR
I could get through all the theirs theres and theyres to even be able to understand the thing. I'm not a grammar freak, but a capital I would be nice.
-drginger
Sorry for the flames, just constructive criticisim
sweet-cc chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Hey love the story can you write more please. Dont keep me waiting please
Alexanderlover31 chapter 2 . 3/3/2012
OMG! Please update!
LilIzzy chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
please update
Opethjewel chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
You should get a beta. I am not trying to be mean to you but the story would be much better if the spelling and grammar errors were corrected.
hateme101 chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
I can not wait for the next chapter but add more detail to your chapter
lizzie malfoy chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
hahhhahhahhahahhhaahahhahah u dont know how to spell their fainted dumb ass
MackenzieStarr chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
please update really soon i love it!
WritingisLife95 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
hmm sounds interesting if you want i could beta read this story just to help you out with a few grammer and spelling errors. But other than that its a good start and interesting idea :) i suggest making the chapters a bit longer though. So anyway if you want to take me up on my offer just PM me and i'l be happy to help you out :)
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