Reviews for Ghost in the machine
Wingman0 chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
I must say very interesting story you have going so far. I like the plot so far good story movement with out being rushed and as far as I can remember everyone's in character.

One thing I've noticed was some of the words you used didn't seem to flow well. I would say find your self a good pre-reader to help with this problem.

Other than that this story is definitely worth keeping an eye on.

Wingman0