Reviews for Power Rangers Sigma Factor
WolfsbaneX chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Sweet. Where's Stanford?
Michelle the Editor chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This is a great start. Your prose is good, though occasionally a little wordy and comma-hungry, and the characters are intriguing. Wait, r'lyeh? Your bad guy is CTHULHU? That is awesome! I only just realized, though, that you said the age range would be early-to-mid teens, and having not looked back, I assumed Gale to be a near-adult, not a fifteen-year-old. Are you absolutely sure the word "assaulted" is the one you want in the morphing sequence? Could you maybe put some line breaks between scene changes? The lack thereof is confusing. Really, though, those are all just minor technical problems, and when I end up pointing those out, that means you're doing everything else right, so bravo.