Reviews for Just Forget the World
Mrs. 11th chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Katy and James are really cute! For a second, I kinda sorta did think for a miniscule second that something might have been going on between Bianca and James...
a-trip-to-honeydukes chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Wow. Oh my god. Wow. So good. This is probabaly a really rubgish review because I can't help but do anything except gawk at the amazingness of the story, but so so so good.
Addicted-To-Sugar-Quills chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Okay. Wow. Damn, you've completly changed my my mind about James pairings, love this story
nerdybandgirl47 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Aww...that was sweet I'm glad everything worked out in the end! Keep up the good work
Melodiux chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Love it! Such a great story!
potterblacklupin-4ever chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
that was really good and really cute :)

and you have a really great writing style
SilenceIsCompliance chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
OMG. That was so sweet and cute and adorable and awesome! Great job, I honestly don't think there's a way I could have enjoyed that more. That was amazing!
BronzeNifler168 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Oh WOW! This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read!

If I HAD to change one thing, I would vchange this line, "She's realised that maybe people can see past the rough exterior to what's inside. Maybe they're not as bad as they seem." It seems a little cheesy but that's ok; I love cheesey things.

If I had to change everything(BUT I WOULDN'T)except one thing, I would keep the last bits at Hogwarts. The cutest bits in the story, I think.

AMAZING!

9.8/10

Needless to say...

YOU HAVE ME CONVINCED!
renzhie chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Ahem, so this is my official review. :]

First of all, I loveses the song, yo! It made me think about something melancholy, but that's just me. Then, somehow, when I read your first paragraph, it seems so formal. The 'They do not, however, thinks of his young daughter' part, but then again, I read it when I was thinking about tablet. I like Katelyn's character, she is such a Slytherin that makes me slightly annoyed at her. ;) (/is ignoring the fact that she is so Slytherin some time)

Casey is hilarious. ;) SHE LOVES FOOTBALL, YO! SHE IS THE MAN! BOOYEAH! /did totally copy that from youtube 'HP actors speak in American way' Tom is hilarious,yo. xD

And then, there comes James. JAMES POTTER II. ;D I am not going to squeal because

1. I like his granpa's better

2. Jane is totally going to kill me. ;)

James is SO FREAKING ADORABLE THAT IT HURTS SOOO. ;D

Two nitpicks:

1. you use 'sort of' quite lot. ;D

2. Yo, James is a British, he will never ever say soccer as a reference to football. xD

OH GOSH, I LOVE JAMES. ;D

heck, who is this Candi Rein?

"I only asked because there's a set of twins at our school, a girl and a boy, and the boy had a best friend who started fooling around with his twin sister. But they didn't tell him, and he found out anyway, and then it started spiraling out of control. Big blow up and all."

So, yeah, this is the reason why they fall apart, yeah? Oh gosh, Abele will be alone. Poor him. xD

"I wouldn't- couldn't- date her."

For some reasons, Ria's reply stuck in my head.

And for a Gryffindor, Bianca hangs a lot with Slytherins, doesn't she? /facepalm xD

HECK, SHE WON'T DO THAT(cheating). Oh gosh, Katy, you are more insecure than B, and that's saying something.

"No problem," Bianca smirks, reminding her a lot of Augustus Flint (another Slytherin playboy).

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHA

I was sure as hell only the RPers who found that sentence hilarious.

and yeah, B's character was spot on, great job!

THE LETTER! aodaihdaosdknasdklsnkldnz

I LOVEEEE YOUU! HAHAHA

B... on the other hand. will probably snog the hell out of him.

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Did I just admit what I have been hiding?

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you really don't want to know what they are doing in my head when I read 'you're coming here, right?'. ;)

btw,

/really wants to write B/Aug fic. xD Mad: You .I .fictionpress. B/Aug story. HAHA. /insane

Okay, I am really off topic, but you just had to bring them! XD

Overall, this was really fun to read. :) James's character was great! and the plot was really flowing well. )

Marvelous job! /standing applause and yada yada yada. ;D I love this to pieces. ;) /will totally read it over and over again because I am such a girl. hahaha

See you in next 10k. B/Zhie is signing off. ;)
kingslayers chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
MADZILYNIKINSIZZLEBEAR!

Okay, first off, I like your James II :)

He's different to my James, but he's still got that /essence/, yo

Katelyn... I kinda like her, kinda don't. DON'T WORRY; IT ISN'T JUST COS SHE'S NOT CASSIE XDXD

Her character seems a bit up-and-down for my tastes, I think. She's a great, and complex OC, but she's just not who I'd have paired with James. I'd have put her with a Slytherin Al, maybe... I don't know. But I felt that she was well developed, and a good/intriguing OC.

I think I have a disorder. I want to scream:

hehe

I did love your characterisations, though! It's not my bias that makes me think she'd be good with Al - I'm not saying she doesn't work with James (you made them work quite well, actually ;D), but based on the information we can glean about her, she seems like an Al girl ;)

[I'm too scared to even suggest Lysander or Louis XD]

I thought you did this in a very believable way, and I did like Casey, she seemed awesome. She seemed like a stable rock when Katy was having her ups-and-downs about James - Is he cheating? Is he not? - as opposed to the start, where che seemed a bit much - she had a very full-on personality, but I liked that :)

I felt that you tied it in VERY WELL - the whole fic - and I loveloveloved the little cameos ;)

REPRIMANDS (SORRY, COULDN'T RESIST!)

Katy - Some parts of you annoyed me, but I don't know if I can blame you. I think your Dad needs to be more understanding, but I think you were good in the sense that you didn't flip him off when he told you the delightful soccer camp news.

WHY WOULD JAMES CHEAT? WITH BIANCA? HE'S TOO ADORABLE TO DO THAT XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

Candi - You're like a Merilyn Goyle on nicotine. Just accept he doesn't love you ;)

Aug - AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW hehe

Bella - This is awkward... Schizo, much? XD

Bianca - You were a great best friend, and that's why you rock ;)

All in all, I think this was an amazing piece of writing. I'm not converted to this OC, but I don't think I'll ever unconvert from CassieJames, it's getting ridiculous :/

I like the OC as a character though ;)

And the actual writing and grammar and stuff was good :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

I think you could have expanded on character backgrounds a bit more, but it wasn't necessary, as I could understand it all. The only thing is, I really only understood the five Hogwarts arrivals (Bella, Aug, Bianca, Ria, Abele) because of RP, so I don't know how non-RPers would see it..

I've just read over this, and I feel quite mean :(

I don't mean to sound harsh, if I do, please don't be offended/upset

I don't want to lose my (Alexander?)Scamander :/

Jane xxxxxx
centralperks chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Yay, this was so cute! James lots lof love, and the whole namesake thing was tied in reallyreally nicely. I don't have time to give a full review, but I

LOVED.

IT.

Great job!
renzhie chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
you know what? I stayed awake for forty five minutes after I said goodbye to you, then I slept till 2 am. This is insane. I am freaking out now.

By the way, this is my unofficial review, I will give the 'real' one when I am back with my account. Plus, I haven't really read the whole story. I love that you keep 'everyone' in character, you know what I mean.

/goes back to freak out and study
RavenxIsxAxBlackxRose chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This was so good! i wish i could write like this, it was superb! i especially love the ending,

you should be proud of this!
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Wow. That was fantastic. :D Great job with this Mad. :D

I'm totally shipping James and your OC now. :D

I give it ten stars. :D
TheKittyRin chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
This was a very nice oneshot, I loved it. And wow, it took quite some times to read, but it was good. :) Thank you for this lovely read!

Good luck,

Florence
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