This was awesome. Very heartfelt.

Amazing~

I loved this.

Great story! I really liked it!

is there a sequel?

awesome!

Welllll I liked your story alot! Though if you want some kind of critique PLEASE put the translations in the chapter they appear in! I was very confused at the most critical points in the story when they suddenly said things in japanese! But like I said earlier it was a good story. Thank you for writing. Bye.

I absolutely loved this story. amazing. you captured Kenshin perfectly. i loved the tomoe flash backs and i am so grateful you didn't kill haiyashii. yay! i hope you write a sequel

Satio lives by the Shinsengumi code "Aku Soku Zan" (悪即斬), which literally means "Slay Evil Immediately". Which is the phrase that you wanted translating for...

I put off reading this for so long! I've been avoiding it. :) I'm glad I finally read it! It was well worth it.

Hey, I just re-read your fic. I love it as much the second time as I did the first!

"You've no idea how much I'm going to enjoy this fight, Battousai. I've been wanting to kill you for a long time, even more since you gave me that little love tap back at the inn."

"If it had been a 'love tap', you wouldn't have been down and out for the count," Kenshin retorted. "When did you wake up anyway? Last week?"

Great line!

Anyway, I probably came up earlier as either Captian Jack Sparrow or Akiko Nagi. Anyhoo, thanks for writing!

I'm at a loss for words...

hey! this is brilliant! but there's a mistake in the glossary. at least, I think so.

Aizu - a rogue group of Ishin Shishi, traitors (Right? Well, basically)

Aizu's actually a place, a han, actually, like Choushuu or Satsuma. Sorta like a province. They sided with the bakufu.

Well written!

i realy loved this story... u did a great job

keep up the good work! that sounded weird... lol

ja ne!