|Reviews for Of Science and Magics|
| AchillesSaber chapter 14 . 3/14
. . . I hate you . . . so dang much . . .
Please, please, please update! I'm begging you, please update! Please update even though the last time you update was around three years ago!
| Uemei chapter 7 . 3/14
Seriously? In the chapter, the very same chapter that Ruiko says to Touma she wants power so she can help too, you decide to stick with canon and go to Komoe?! If it weren't for the "World of Cardboard" Speech this would be the most disappointing thing in this chapter.
My advice, aside from avoiding "World of Cardboard" Speeches, is to use canon as a primer when writing AU's. The most fun part of an AU is watching events unfold differently because of little changes made at the start.
It's to late to do anything about this now, but in the future you should remember to ask yourself, 'have (I/the characters) done anything that could make these events will play out in a more interesting manner?'
| Sp1r1t chapter 14 . 3/8
Please come back! This story is yet to be finished! This a damn good story so you have to come back!
| Destrark chapter 14 . 2/26
shit, that was a damn nasty ending. good writing though.
| TridentScythe chapter 14 . 2/15
I have to say, this chapter ending is similar to a blindingly fast kick to the groin, at first not feeling the pain, then all of sudden you break down because the feels hit you. My first read-over of the final parts, about Mikoto losing memories of Touma didn't seem believable at first, so I kinda ignored it but after reading it a few more times, tears were shed. I'm not so sure as to commend you or hate you for that, but I'll say you did a very good job of writing this story as always.
| TheTrueMasterofTempest chapter 2 . 1/24
This took me like 2 hours to finish reading. Just one chapter.
It's a good story. How you incorporated Touma into Railgun
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/21
You magnificent bastard. Somehow, you made a loss scene that didn't involve me wanting to murder you, feed your body parts to orphans, and force them to run a mile with a bag over their heads before burning their bodies. You are a god. A god, I say.
| Zeita Hikari chapter 14 . 1/15
Fak. Fak. Fak(?).
That's freakin' awesome. And I blinked to held back my tears. That's too... Mellow. Man,I almost crying when Misaka Mikoto didn't remember Kamijou Touma. Well,I kinda love it. Really really love it at that part. Well then,see you! Please update!
| sakurayukari chapter 14 . 1/9
Is there like a sequel or something? Or is this just a slow update?...
| Phyle chapter 14 . 12/21/2013
Hi there Stormwolfex!
I was a bored fan of the "To Aru" series when I remembered a thing called fanfiction existed on the net so I looked for stories and I stumbled on this one. It was the longest fanfic I had ever seen so I hesitated to read it at first but after reading some of your other stories I decided to read it too.
Took me nearly a day and a half non-stop to finish it, and I did nearly nothing else, but now that I'm done I don't regret anything and I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Being a huge fan of the pairing Touma/Mikoto, to give you an idea on my state of mind after reading the 14 chapters, I hesitate between : 1-worshipping you for having the idea to make them childhood friends, blending so well the "Index" and "Railgun" series and the general quality of the story. And : 2-hiring a hitman to punish you for daring to break the Touma/Mikoto pairing like this and still leaving a hope for recovery, It's mean!
Since I'm not that rich I'll leave you alone, don't worry... That and the fact that it would prevent you from updating your crossover "To Aru/SAO" too. Being a fan of "SAO" as well, I hope you'll find the time to keep on both fics.
Anyway, thanks for writing those stories and I hope you keep up the good work!
(I apologize if I made any mistake with the spelling or the syntax, I'm not used to using english, I usually only read it and I'm actually French.)
| tkiller237 chapter 14 . 12/21/2013
i loved this story i think its even better than the anime please get the next chaper out soon
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/18/2013
This story is by far one of the best fanfics I've read on this site, probably the best on Toaru. I haven't really read that much, but I know the ones that (I think) are really good ones. Because you had put their backgrounds, they seem to be in character, somehow, even with the original ones. I've only watched Railgun anime and read Railgun's and some of Index's manga, so probably I'm not that qualified in saying that, since I've never read the novel.
On this chapter itself, it is very cruel for you to make Mikoto forget Touma. Well, it is probably going to be very interesting indeed, if the story is going to continue, since there are going to be lots of possibilities to how this chapter would affect everyone in the story. I hope if you did continue, you would somehow got Mikoto to love Touma back, since I'm quite a fan, be it by starting from scratch (for her) or by recovering from the amnesia. And I really hope you will continue, even considering you haven't updated (or even have any activity on the site) for more than 2 years, since this is one hell of a good story. Good read!
| Kagehana.Tsukio chapter 14 . 11/26/2013
No. That did NOT just happen. NO. PLEASE DONT LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT! OHMIGODSIMGONNADIE.
| Batpuddingman chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
This is a wonderful story! You keep the story interesting even when having to explain larger more complex points. You've done a fantastic job with the characters! You've developed them and created an attachment with them and the audience wonderfully! If you ever need a beta reader I'd be more than happy to do it! I really can't wait for the next chapter...batman out
| skypasser chapter 14 . 11/10/2013
Hey, I love this series, and I mean it. I like To Aru Majutsu no Index, but I have not extreme knowledge of it because I have yet to read the Light Novel. But because of this FanFic, I'm slowly learning it. I would love to have you back writing this fix again. Miss you