Reviews for The Prince and the Pea
Emi's Fiction Addiction chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Yep, the coin thing happened to me too. Twice. The first time, my left shoulder was totally blue and black, and the second one was when I accidentally slept with a coin under my forehead. I had to go to school with a round spot on the middle of my face. It was totally embarrassing.

But the story was really nice! I liked it very much. Thank you for your efforts!
Crazy-Hime chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
Good Story... That sure is a Loong One-shot. :3
Carol Cosplay chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
JustR chapter 2 . 12/25/2011
This was amazing! Seriously, it wad genius.

They were meant to get married, but then the parents weren't so sure, but they fell in love in the end :D

JustR chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
This was just too cute!

Naruto you naughty prankster xD

Poor Sasuke, he is such a prince ;P
Ookami-Ryuu chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
I really really liked this story as well... and every time Sasuke mentioned Naruto's bed being more comfortable I laughed about Naruto having forgotten that pea under the mattress! XD

Thank you for the entertainment. *bright smile*

Ookami-Ryuu chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
I had so much fun reading this. You really did a great job, both with the whole idea – how you wrote the characters and their different interactions. How you set up the universe-roles. Naruto's different pranks *chuckle* Kiba and Sakura, I loved those hahaha.

And Sasuke of course. Sasuke and Naruto and how you wrote those two together. I really loved those parts.

Peas *snicker*

Your language... I really liked that too. How your writing style is so nice.

Thank you for a very very enjoyable story.

I will read the next one as well but since that seems to be a different little story on its own with just a similar theme I decided to review this one first and read the other one later. *smile*

Brrr chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
That was awesome and sweet and so freakin' adorable!

It would have been funny if their ring had a pea-shaped emerald on it!

Good job!
bleacheddragontail chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
thankyouu 3 i really liked this story :D something that nags me though is the fact that the father at the end of the story was reading all of that to his son. what kind of father goes into excruciating detail about the glory of sex to their most likely toddling son? but i liked both stories :D i think both their personalities were rounded up nicely (: more plox? ;D
noname00 chapter 2 . 10/10/2011
The first chap was great and I loved the second one just as much
rokudaime09 chapter 2 . 9/17/2011
it was cute too think you made a story out of it.
kirstielynn chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
thats soo cuuuuute
blkbird7139 chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
That was really great, thank you
The Unabiding Helios chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!~ THAT WAS SOOOOO CUTEEE! They were sooooooo-! KYEHEHEHEHHEHE! That made me smile sooooo much! The way they had their little prank wars and Iruka being so kyuuutttteeee! AND U EGEN MANAGED TO PUT ITACHI-SAMA IN DER! D the only bad part was Kakashi wasn't *sulks in corner* must u hate Kakashi no Baka so much? *puppy dog face* WHYYYYY?

BUT all in all D this story is heart warming to the max 3 kyehehehehhe so kyute .
AsunaTakiko chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
I love this fanfiction! Both stories are well written and are so cute. The plot is interesting, amusing and the characters are well depicted. In the second story Sasuke is a bit OOC because I don't think that he would prank due to his Uchiha pride but it was really amusing in seeing him like that xD What I also like is that you weave a constant main theme (peas xD) in your plot.

It's a pity that this piece of reading doesn't have more would absolutely deserve some more :)

Hope you will write some more wonderful stories like this one
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