|Reviews for Bio Fooled|
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/29
Great ending, love the poem. Thank you.
| RequitedLove chapter 4 . 3/24/2013
I just re-watched 4-08, so was very pleased this came up in my re-reading of older stories. I loved thinking this was true:
'...it was almost as if she could hear a distant chorus of "Awww…"'
Perfect and funny.
Such an emotional time for Martin. I find myself inside his head more easily, so thanks for her point of view.
| Sffgcddrtfcvbhh chapter 4 . 5/13/2011
Aww! I liked the "distant chours of 'awws'"
| GriffinStar chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
Really enjoyed your final chapter, now you can venture further with another story. xxx
| robspace54 chapter 4 . 4/18/2011
Such a nice story covering all of perhaps an hour of Portwenn time. Well done!
| Sendibo chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Aww, that was really nice :) Glad it's worked out (for the moment at least!)
| Littleguinea chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Well done Diane. I hope you continue to write DM stories, there's still quite away to go before we get series 5! :)
| jd517 chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Very nice. I am glad they have a tender moment when trouble seems far, far away. It never seems to stay away from Martin very long so I hope that they can enjoy it. You have quite a knack for getting inside their heads and enriching the scenes from the show in marvelous ways. I hope you will venture into speculation a little more and keep us entertained waiting on season 5.
| Bodmin chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Thanks for this nice story. Martin and Louisa will have some way to go for a working relationship, but I think we all hope they'll finally get there. With Martin's burst of emotions before/during the birth, it will be a probable time for him to start getting close again.
| fanficfan71 chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
A nice finish DianeB :)
| Sendibo chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
Aww, lovely chapter - great narration of my absolute favourite DM moment!
| Bodmin chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
I liked the way you described Martin's first encounter with Ellingham jr., how his face muscles are not used to smiling, but try it anyhow, and how the baby dangles. His facial expression is priceless when he looks at this strange bundle he clearly has no clue how to hold it without hurting it with his huge hands.
| GriffinStar chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
Another enjoyable interpretation of events through Louisa's eyes. Now I'm looking forward to seeing how you portray events following the birth. xxx
| fanficfan71 chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
Poor Martin, he never does know when to shut up!
| jd517 chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
I love this! Best line is the one about the distant chorus of Awww. I was certainly in that camp when I saw this episode. I love how you are inside her head. Excellent!