Reviews for Departure
The Great Butler chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
As a Keito fan who was left with similar feelings over the ending, I have to really applaud you for this. The description is especially vivid and detailed, and really works hand-in-hand with your pacing technique to create a suitably emotional piece. I can only hope that if Keito's story is continued in the Star Driver movie, it is handled this well.

The only criticism I have is to point out a couple of misplaced apostrophes. That should tell you that you did very well there, too.