|Reviews for How Dumbledore Destroyed the Wizarding World|
| moonfeather58 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
A. The bastards (Snape and Dumbledore should have had everything they inflicted on Harry and then sentenced to the Dementor's Kiss, B. the wizarding world deserves to suffer at the hands of Voldemort, and C. I'd find it hilarious if Hermione and the Weasley clan got slowly executed. Sad that Harry had to kill himself to escape the wizarding world but I don't blame him.
| DeliberateEffort chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Dramatic and more along the lines of what I absolutely believe would be the result of a forced marriage and all that follows it. I found you through a review you left for Annabeth Volturi 'I cant love you' Painfully she's most likely a 13 yr old with frightening romanticized notions of 'consent' (Snape really loves him and doesn't beat him so its ok. Or Harry choose marriage instead of dying/oblivate/etc so he agreed. My god! I'm an Sev/Harry shipper and that whole scenario plus her defending it was terrifying) esp that free-fall straight into Stockholm syndrome.
Actual Review: There were issue's with your story; it felt rushed, some scenes could have been fleshed out more to build up the tone of the story and brief overviews of other characters reactions (like how exactly McGonagall, Moody and Ron felt. etc) would have given a more in-depth feel. I won't say its a beautiful story, not for your lyric abilities or the content. But I damned well loved it. It such a breath of fresh air after all the appalling Annabeth stories out there.
| graylifezone chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
You are indeed angry at those who turns rap into a romance, aren't you? Because this story is screaming ANGRY all over it.
I totally agree with you, rap is rap and how the fanfiction world has turned it upside down really worries me about it impacts in the real life.
As for how you wrote this story, I found myself so pleased with it. This is the perfect way to make a complete one-shot story and covers all it needs.
| Merrr chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Nice story I like much better then the other stories I've read on the same subject, i often have to stop reading them, usually for the reason you pointed out of that Harry falls in love with his captore, I've only ever read one story where that worked out and it had Harry being heavily abused by Veron before being captured and then by his captor being treated with more kindness then he was used to, it was still wrong but it had the correct set up for Stockholm Syndrome to work. Awesome story it had a very realistic feel to it that a lot of other stories don't have.
| Para Noiblood chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
| TenebrisCor chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
wow.. that was very well done. It is completely dark, but it does give an interesting perspective on what would happen in those dark FFN stories if harry did not succeed in getting away. Dumbledore can be extremely dark in cases such as those, and this.
This scenario seemed completely realistic, given the circumstances.
Thank you for taking the time to write this.
| hentai18ancilla chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Justice in Death.
| SenpaiNoSasuke chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
| Mashkai30 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
| Ananymous chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Really enjoyed your story. I absolutely hate those stories that have Harry or whomever falling in love with their rapist and have often described them as "Stockholm Syndrome" myself. So glad there is another sane person out there. Besides, even aside from the distrubing fact that so many authors seem to condone rape, I never thought it was true to the Harry character anyway- who would first do anything to resist such a bond and if all else fails would rather die than live a life of misery. Hope you update Veela's Mistake soon!
| HP IS AWESOME chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
could you make a prequel that expained the plan more and how his friends became spies.
| Caesar Volturi chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Daaaaamn. I was SO not expecting Harry to take his life. But if I was in his place I would have to xD I was very pleased about Severus not being able to get money out of Harrys account and etc. I loved your story! You know, you could write a second chapter to this about how it wasnt Harry who killed him self, but that Voldemort had kidnapped/saved Harry at some point and he is now working under The Dark Lord to destroy Dumbledore after he was able to escape by Mad Eye Moody or who ever, and is now gone a bit wacked in the head from the dementors. Yeah... :3 But I love your story!
| Spottedpool chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
That's awful! Not the story just what happens. Poor Harry. And u have a point. Why would anyone fall in love with someone who rapes them? :P great job. :) Dumbledore and Severus got what they deserved.
| tenga chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
I usually wonder how I would react every time I read a bonding fic in general, whether it's a forced bond like this or a soul bond or anything else, be it slash or not slash (I don't actually know what the fanfic term for straight relationships is). I've long thought literally the only bonding that can work is a bond were both/all participants loved each other prior to the bonding, and are mature enough to handle it, though this means I only usually read Harry/Hermione or Ginny bonding fics from above fifth year at the earliest, for obvious reasons. Although I have read one Voldemort/Harry one that was shockingly good and somehow didn't feel weird while I was reading it.
Anyway, your story was great, it really conveyed the realities of forced bonding fics that most other authors miss. You really made me feel for Harry's plight, and the suicide, well, I think everyone saw that coming, but it was really the only way to go.
I liked how Dumbledore and Snape thought they could bind Harry like this and either rape him or be facilitating it, but if they gave Harry small treats like being able to go outside, or let him have his own property (his wand), he wouldn't mind. It took the appalling behaviour of the canon versions of their characters to the extreme, but because of the abuse and neglect he suffered either from or because of those two in canon, it doesn't seem like it is OOC to me.
My only problem with the story is how abruptly it ended. It went from Harry's suicide to the suicide note to a very brief mention of Dumbledore and Snape being summarily executed, then it was suddenly over. The ending reads far too briefly. It really needs a detailed epilogue. I would have quite liked to see the reactions of Voldemort, Hermione, Minerva and Filius.
May the Muse be with you, and may your other story, Veela's Mistake, be updated soon and often.
p.s. I noticed a review for this story which said they thought Snape's behaviour not quite as egregious as Dumbledore's, with the only justification for this belief being that "Snape was trying to make it pleasant on Harry." I wonder if they even read the same story. Snape rapes Harry at least once a day, curses and beats him, and denies him freedom of speech and every other human right and comfort. He only gives Harry the barest of treats when he is afraid that Harry won't fight for them and when Harry tries to poison him. That doesn't seem all that pleasant to me. On the other hand, he tries to get Harry off whilst he's raping him. It doesn't quite even the scales, does it? There is also the fact that he suggested the plan to Dumbledore, offered himself as the husband, drugged Harry so he wouldn't fight as much the first time he was raped, and didn't seem to care in the slightest whether Harry was gay or not. No, Snape was, in my opinion, the true bad guy. Dumbledore at least had done what he did because he feared Harry running off and leaving them to Voldemort, and was willing to sacrifice one to save many. I can understand that even if I don't agree. Snape just seemed like a sadistic paedophile rapist.
| MzBellezza chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
i cant even stop crying