Reviews for Respire
The Miss America chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
So sweet I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
myinuyasha04: I quite enjoyed it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Gleevengers98: It was very good! I also recommended it to my friend!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Booklover2526: I really enjoyed it!
Sheila chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Thank you.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Nicely done. I liked the way you set up the back story about the Striga and how Sam's asthma came about. You described it really well, too. I could feel the panic coming off of the page. Great job.
mandancie chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
oh wow! this was really good. :)
friendshipsoverships chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
So sweet! Oh my gosh I love it
mb64 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Awesome big brother sick clingy Sammy written by Marianna a very well done and enjoyable story. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
oh, this is beautiful...

I love the way you used repetition to evoke feelings. Panic and then peace...
YourxMuse chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Oh, wow. This was really good. The asthma attack and the emotions were so realistic (I have bad asthma, I would know, lol). Did you do research or do you have it too? :O
ladyboz chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Beautiful. Very inspiring read. It kinda made me jealous,i wish i had an amazing big brother like Dean.
ccase13 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
DEan is Sam's protector from all things.
Alex L. Kerr chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I really liked this story - Normally I don't like repetition, but the, "he couldn't breathe," line worked for me in this story. Great job!
Adolescently chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
This is wonderful. Asthmatic Sam is a favourite of mine, and this is really well-written. Another great read, thank you! :)
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