Reviews for Respire
Rachelly chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Great fic! I love the way you wrote Dean. He's awesome. Totally there for Sam, hating anything that threatens his little brother, and desperate to "save Sam"...his whole life, his whole purpose. You wrote him very well...his words are very spot on with his character on the show. I love Sam's vulnerability too. Great little fic! THanks for sharing your talents with us! ~Rachelly
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Because sometimes it was in his toiletry kit; sometimes it was in his duffle; sometimes it was in the Impala's glove compartment; and sometimes it was just plain missing.


Love this. You had me unable to breathe!

Brilliant...using the shtriga - as the culprit!

And Dean knowing Sam would be out of it the next day. Pissed John or not.

My fav part...Dean humming and humming.

Just lovely!

Per your norm!

Thank you!

judyann chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Wonderful little story again! I loved it! And loved that you tied it to the Shritiga attack.
vonnie836 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Oh wow, scary is not even the right word for this. Having suffered a few attacks, also never this severe as a kid and seen adults with COPD/chronic asthma I could picture this. Only it's always worse with kids like this. One of the worst things I can ever imagine is not being able to breathe and you certainly brought this fear out in a very realistic and dramatic way. It was also a great way to bring in some Dean guilt and brotherly bond. Completely breathtaking in every meaning of the word! Hugs, Vonnie
Webster chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Oh, man, I love you so much for writing this. (That might make me evil, but I don't care!
phyllis16 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
hi i enjoyrd this very much, i love the way you have dean taking care of sam
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
GUH. Who knew I could LOVE Asthmatic Sam so much! This was wonderful! In-character, well-written (loved the repetition of 'he couldn't breathe'), with the perfect amount of brotherly shmoop to make a fangirl's heart positively soar...Astoundly awesome work, Marianna! :D :D :D chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Loved this :) Great how you had Sam's asthma start after the shtriga attack, really believable. And both Sam and Dean's panic was tangible as his condition got worse and Dean looked for the inhaler. Loved how Dean took care of Sam and, when the attack was over, Sam snuggled into Dean, exhausted by the attack.

Beautifully written and perfectly executed.
zekeschance chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
What a nice surprise! Great detail! Loved how you tied Sam's asthma into the shtrigia attack. Very clever. Very good description of an asthma attack too. Yes Dean, you love that floppy haired, scrawny kid like a parent and big brother. What would Sam do without you? Love these one shots you're doing. Thanks so much!
Wallflowergirl chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I loved this - just a brief little glimpse into their lives, with all the good elements - sick Sam, awesome big brother Dean saving the day, a healthy dose of cuddling and, as always in your fics, beautifully written. I loved the way you tied it into canon with the shtriga, too...
DarkAngel19881 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
another wonderful story! I enjoyed this.
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This is so beautifully written, both the feeling of having and asthma attack and also the helplessness of watching someone you love go through one. Dean is all kinds of tender awesomeness in this, which makes me love him even more.

I also really like that you tied it in with the strigka and a little bit of neverending guilt from that.
Madebyme chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Great fic, I thoroughly enjoyed seeing the boys relationship shine through even the most dire of circumstances.

Plus I really liked your explanation as to how Sam got his Asthma so suddenly and so severely, it makes perfect sense that it was linked to the Shriga attack.

It was a nice touch adding in how Sam's asthma has affected Dean and John's relationship and I'd love to see more of that. How John really feels and how it's affecting Sam. Are you planning on revisiting this?

Thanks for sharing. Take care, Abbi
Stock chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Great, great story.
jensengirl4eva chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Awww I loved it! Awesome story...
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