Reviews for Best Part Of Me Was Always You
Rachel Garber chapter 16 . 2/17/2014
I thought he never bottomed before in the several chapters ago, hmm missed that, this was deliciously sweetly, tenderly wonderful. wow, so loving so just awesome I really loved reading that, the caring, the loving, the adoration they each have for the other. love my pretty boys loving each other. btw found a picture of "Edward" when he was about 16 in one of my Twilight books, The Robert Pattinson Album by Paul Stenning. It is a picture of him, well actually 4 pictures two of them close-ups when he was performing with the Barnes Theater Company. I always like to have a picture of "Edward" in my minds eye when I read ffn, and there aren't many out there from his teenage years. He was 20 when he was in Vanity Fair, and looks too mature to be Edward. Love, love, loved it. Brava.
Rachel Garber chapter 15 . 2/17/2014
I didn't cry when the doctor was examining him, I cried when Jasper saw how badly he was beaten; kind of surprised Dr, Seth didn't give Jasper some kind of sedation, Valium or something when he started freaking out. Didn't they wrap a bandage around Edward's ribs? Good for Emmett, they really must have beaten the shit out of him that he could take him back to his place and not have him not wake up. And Charlie was cool, didn't press anymore about where they found him. Good chapter, I cried a lot, very sad, thankfully Edward was not raped, that really would have broken him. Did they ever find Edward's car?
Rachel Garber chapter 14 . 2/17/2014
Okay, I know this had to happen for the story to move forward but why the fuck didn't Edward file sexual harassment charges against this scumbag, really a bit pissed well impatient I guess is the word I don't want to be angry with Edward, but really, he should have told Jasper what was going on with this skank. So, they are reunited and criminal charges will be filed against this maggot
Rachel Garber chapter 13 . 2/17/2014
Scared the fucking shit out of me girl, I thought that was real, and that would be terrible but this is what worse, no what the fuck, sucker punched in the stomach, gotta dos something selse before I read the next. I can't even go back and read that dream sequence again too freaked out,
Rachel Garber chapter 12 . 2/17/2014
That fucker Aro he did something to Edward can I go through this screen and ripe his balls off, omg wtf but on the upside thanks for remembering that little mole on the right side of the back of neck omg, gah fuck me sideways
Rachel Garber chapter 11 . 2/17/2014
I have a lot of gay friends, and I have heard that this really does happen, that couples who are obviously together wedding/commitment bands no deterrent to men who have decided that they will try to take one man away from the other. So skanky behavior. It's as if having the ring is like a waving a carrot in front of them, they are determined that come hell or high water, they will have what belongs to another man, and usually just to be able to say they did it. great chapter. E should file sexual harassment charges against Aro
Rachel Garber chapter 10 . 2/17/2014
That was adorable, I laughed myself silly over that one, poor kids first time all kinds of choices, had no idea they come in sizes, and lube, then Emmett on top of it, and "just don't buy pink" they are just too cute for words. Umm and I love the way Jasper is so tender with Edward, he is so sweet. btw, I couldn't see the banner kept coming up webpage not available, but I saw the blog and loved you banner for that, esp that you were able to find a picture of Rob and Jackson, um I mean Edward and Jasper. Great chapter
Rachel Garber chapter 9 . 2/17/2014
Yeah, I don't trust that Aro either, I'm pretty sure that Edward wears a wedding ring, and what a skank. Jasper owns a pub but I bet he tries to put him down tries to make him feel like he is not in Edward's league, btw thank you so much for leavinghis body hair, cause I just read an angsty but great E and J story and what do you think Edward did, he waxed, everything and I do mean everything. including his armpit hair which I really find very sexy. great story, I expect we will be hearing what a fucker Aro is in future chapters.
Rachel Garber chapter 8 . 2/17/2014
I knew there was a baby involved, that is way cool, didn't they have sex on the couch or on the kitchen counter or something. Deviant boys my ass, that is funnyI was kind of hoping they would that would be way cool but it is Rose's apt after all yay we're gonna have a baby. Good ch and thank you Debra Ann for being on board with this even if slash doesn't appeal. take a bow girl
Rachel Garber chapter 7 . 2/17/2014
Nah ah, our boy does not do, "he's sexy and he knows it" our Edward is a shy boy and is totally unconscious of his allure; okay just had to get that out there. I knew he wanted them to start having a family. I also having a feeling that computer is going to throw them a curve, well I hope not, hope Jasper cleared the chat and Emmett doesn't find it and the whole thing blows up in Jasper's face I think Edward will forgive him on that, but I think there is potential for problems,
Rachel Garber chapter 6 . 2/17/2014
Oh yeah I heard that on Comedy Central where the guys on the Red Neck circuit Jeff Foxworthy as I recall say that, Butter My Butt and Call Me a Buscuit very cut loved the loving that was so sweet, hmm what I am thinking and I hope I am right is that Edward wanted to start a family, adopt of find a surrogate mother and Jasper wanted no part of it.
Rachel Garber chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
My guess, ahh, going on what Jasper said about Edward being a romantic,he probably doesn't want their first time to be in a rush where his parents could come home at any minute. Not sure what or where he would have in mind but he surely wants things them to plan things out. Just guessing
Rachel Garber chapter 4 . 2/17/2014
I saw that one coming a mile away, poor Jasper, so insecure, he just didn't get it at first, and btw, oh my did you just describe him to a T, wow got it all down so perfectly the petal pink blush, the fuck hawt smile, the sex hair, the shy boy thing he has going cause we do know he is a shy boy. Gah, crikey killing me here.
Rachel Garber chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
Oh boy, do I love that blushing boy, petal pink blush I think it was described by another author, takes my fucking breath away it does, and even his ears get pink. So squeally pink or is it sqwee, or squee I don't know and don't much care, but this is a great story. Now to find out what the hell Jasper did to fuck up the best part of me. Asshat.
Rachel Garber chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
Oh boy back to boyhood, or rather the teen years cause we know about horny teenage boys, don't we. Love the picture of our boys, one so sweet and innocent the other well, badass all the way. Opposites attract so they say, let's see what next ch brings
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