Reviews for Paint
TheHard chapter 6 . 7/10/2013
Hi... Nice story, but a really weird one... I still can't leave the tought "hey! where are the 'sexy times'", but I kind of can see what are you doing here. I can't see this happening in a overly conservative culture like the japanese, but is pretty well done.

Hope you can update it soon :)
demonfox910 chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
uuuum, weird, but fun.

unexpected, yet well-written.

my mind has been fucked.

I uh...i THINK i look forward to more.

my one problem: kenichi is an extremely moral character, but i think you could have elaborated on his "difficulties" a bit more. i dunno, but i think him repeating "i will not stare are miu's body" while in a cold shower would be comedy gold
ThatGuyYouWishYouKnew chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
Oh well even if you say that you suck at make it up as you go I have seen alot worse and it still makes me laugh also you stay true to the characters which isn't easy to do because your going by the mindset someone else made up... anyway keep up the great work
TrinityKnight93 chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
This story is ok, so far. The part with the training and Ma's reaction to the whole clothes optional thing was a bit funny thought.
Alpenwolf chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
nice training ... and the only one who seems to have problems with this is ukita ... maybe one day he will a way ... or he gets brainwashed like kenichi P
Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2012
this is a pretty funny story i can't wait to see what Niijima is going to do and what will happen when he shows up at the dojo with the way Shigure chases him all the time.
Alpenwolf chapter 5 . 3/15/2012
oh god, what now ... everything were nijima is involved is not good ... the sane members of shinpaku should be prepared for the worst ... are there any sane members in shinpaku at all? ... hmm ... ukita maybe ... or ... freya at most I guess
Alpenwolf chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I have to agree with kisara on this ... miu is a bit insane here
ThatGuyYouWishYouKnew chapter 5 . 2/17/2012
very entertaining it's addicting
ChocoKoko chapter 5 . 2/6/2012
Dude, you should write Nacchi's reaction to Honoka's 'decision'... /shot

Koko
Fangking2 chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
...THIS IS CRAZY! i don't knw what to think, but agree with Kensei. Its like all the hardwork means nothign now...
Fangking2 chapter 3 . 12/24/2011
IF Elder ever finds out...The whole Lige Saving Fist thing is over.
King Kubar chapter 3 . 12/24/2011
Interesting, very interesting. You are able to go this route with out crossing the line into lemon's or the mature rates, and that takes some skill in my opinion. It keeps all the humor, all the proper characteristics, though I think Kenichi is a little to calm about everything. This fic is nice in that it's puts aside combat in favor of plot, and for that I find it good. Well done.
ThatGuyYouWishYouKnew chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
this is quite an original idea i would like to see how it develops
phases.equal.fanfics chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
:) good job this is an interesting topic, and I hope you continue the story!
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