Reviews for Making a Better Yesterday
Guest chapter 19 . 9/12
Robin throws radioactive material into the sea, where one of his friends lives -?
Anyway, your story takes more and more depth. I love the way, how the relationship between Robin and the Batlord develops. Mostly because normaly the enemies just sees their goal and are just freaking enemies. But Batlords relationship towards Robin is just .*u*.
(I hope this doasn't end the way I think it ends)
Robyn Flamebird chapter 29 . 7/7
This was so awesome! I loved the last chapter, it was so awesome.
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 4 . 4/10
Wait why don't they just go back and time and prevent the death of their kids. Wouldn't taking the kids to their future mess up the time stream and put their existence at risk?
PipeDream chapter 29 . 4/4
...shit
I still don't really get what this 'treatment' they keep talking about is
Guest chapter 28 . 4/4
Holy crap THE FEELS
Guest chapter 27 . 4/4
AAAAAWWWWW
Guest chapter 25 . 4/4
Yipes
Guest chapter 25 . 4/4
OMG ARTY CALLED ROY HER BROTHER FIGURE!
PipeDream chapter 24 . 4/4
If this is how those three interact in the comics I am DEFINITLY reading them!
Guest chapter 22 . 4/4
I liked how this chapter went!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/3
They're freaking out, buts it's only positive points for them!
PipeDream chapter 20 . 4/3
I love how Roy didn't notice that how he said 'the youngest of us' could be seen as considering himself part of the team
I know he means this group, but it's still a nice thought
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Don't judge, I take what I can get
Guest chapter 19 . 4/3
AAAWWWWWWW BAT-HUG!
PipeDream chapter 19 . 4/3
Aw...I was hoping that the other kids would be with them when this happened
It feels a little like they're being left out
PipeDream chapter 18 . 4/3
Oooohhh BATMAN IS ON THEIR SIDE
I bet he's not the only one
Like what happened with Batman becoming a better person beachside of Robin initially, I bet they all thought that having the kids again may help them become better people once again
As Barry said, he himself isn't happy with his own actions. And none of them wanted to hurt the kids, they wanted to make them safe; instead they've become the danger
Clark has shown that they're too far gone, or at least he is. That they're in the wrong may finally be getting through to them
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