|Reviews for Torn|
| jansails chapter 7 . 5/7/2011
Since I think James & Victoria are low class white trash & sleazy to boot...naaaaaaaaaahhh, not sexy, YUCKY.
Poor Edward if he was watching, what a blow, what absolute disgust he must have felt, & rage, rage, rage.
| mugglemom08 chapter 6 . 5/7/2011
This is definitely different than anything I've read before. It almost broke my heart when Bella told Edward to stay away from her, but I'm hoping that's just temporary.
| tennesseelamb chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
22bluefic rec'd on twitter..jsyk...LOVE IT...
| tennesseelamb chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
I love it when people pull passages directly from SM and use them in their stories...sometimes in the world of fandom, I forget why and how hard we all fell for Twilight. Can't wait to read more from you!
| 22blue chapter 6 . 5/6/2011
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. But I think that with each new chapter I'm able to read. :)
| SunshineGal3 chapter 6 . 5/6/2011
Excellent chapter, as always. :)
| HopeStreet chapter 6 . 5/5/2011
Black Dagger Brotherhood - my favorite series and my favorite vamp is Vishous. He's all kinds of yumm.
I love this story. I'm doing a lot of internal cringing as Bella continues to get drawn into James and his deranged evil ways.
| NoelleSeven chapter 6 . 5/5/2011
GAH! Poor Edward :-( I have a feeling the title is going to describe Bella's feelings in the upcoming chapters. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one :-)
| thepinktabby chapter 6 . 5/5/2011
*clicks seatbelt* i'm ready for the bumpy ride! I can't wait to see what happens. :D
| teambellaedward chapter 6 . 5/5/2011
| Navarre chapter 3 . 5/5/2011
An excellent take on Bella's first experiences of being newborn upon awakening.
| Navarre chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
Wow! Such a delicious twist to canon.
| Navarre chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I look forward to seeing where you take this.
22blue rec'd this one.
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
I still don't understand why she seems to not remember who Edward is at all.
No doubt that Alice has seen by now that Bella isn't dead - but alas, Edward no longer has a phone for anyone to tell him that.
So . . . James is going to brainwash (for lack of a better term) Bella into being "his"? How's that going to work with Victoria around? She won't mind sharing?
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
Well, at least Edward stopped himself from killing a human!