Reviews for Torn
Drithligh chapter 10 . 2/8/2012
Why can't Edward use words properly? I would think he would be used to how people interpret what he says. But maybe that's the problem, he can't figure out how he sounds to Bella.
Drithligh chapter 8 . 2/8/2012
Will the whole James/Victoria/Bella phenomenon get explained, or rather figured out?
Drithligh chapter 7 . 2/8/2012
I bet Edward's wishing he hadn't destroyed his phone about now.
Drithligh chapter 6 . 2/8/2012
This is sad. I hope Bella gets her mind back, if that's possible.
Drithligh chapter 5 . 2/8/2012
Oh, no... Somebody nice and not human had better find Bella quickly.
Drithligh chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
I'm glad Edward didn't succumb to his grief filled temptation.
Drithligh chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
Wow. That was a great "waking up" chapter. I think in most fics, and in cannon admittedly, Bella transitions into a vampire way to easily. Yours, so far, gives her control and also makes it confusing.
Kemq chapter 15 . 1/3/2012
Great story.
melisa79 chapter 7 . 12/31/2011
I really hated this chapter. too occ
csp4 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
ooza chapter 15 . 11/3/2011
Aww, they got their HEA! I love how Bella got all protective over Edward when he was injured. Wonderful story. :)
ooza chapter 10 . 10/27/2011
I am really loving this story. One of my favorites scenarios is when edward has to earn bella's trust all over again. Usually it's because he left. This is the first time I've read him having to repair someone else's damage. Great job so far!
teambellaedward chapter 14 . 10/12/2011
2brown-eyes chapter 7 . 10/5/2011
That was disgusting not hot. Lust thing is suppose to be with your mate not random. Look at Edward he never gave into lust or felt lust until Bella. Severely disappointed.
sandraev1 chapter 15 . 9/23/2011
Loved it! Bella really happy with her life. I'm glad she was able to see charlie. Thanks
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