|Reviews for Torn|
| Navarre chapter 14 . 9/17/2011
Was he able to hear her thoughts because of the injury and because they are so connected as mates?
Either way, enjoyed the chapter.
| Spamula69 chapter 13 . 8/18/2011
my memory is bad so you must update quickly or else I have to start all over.
Please let there be more lovin.
| Spamula69 chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
I am loving this so far, good job!
| Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
Oh my god. He CHANGED her? WHY did Alice not SEE this?
I completely agree with you about the Canon. Not to mention that, before this - in Twilight - Edward had not told Bella what it was like as a newborn. He didn't really explain the vampire world.
She knew his family fed from animals but, was that it?
He didn't really open up until NM I think...
Loved this chapter but I'm left wondering, where is James? Has he left her? Or is he coming back? *shudders*
I hope Edward can find her... *fingers crossed*
| Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Thank God that SOMEONE ran with this idea, and more importantly, that someone did it RIGHT.
This is exactly what I imagined would happen and, though it is hard reading the pain and wrath that Edward is experiencing, it needs to be done.
Mate for a mate :(
| Luvtwismut chapter 13 . 8/16/2011
Oh how the tables have turned! I'm still supa siked for this amazing fic! I'll wait forever for ya! Good luck on your novel. You go girl!
| kroseph chapter 13 . 8/15/2011
I just love your spin on the story. For the Volturi to come to their house to take Bella was like a nightmare-holy crap. You surprise me every time. Here I'm thinking Edward and Bella will get down and dirty and reside in bliss. Nope! That certainly didn't happen. I squelched a scream when they tore off Edward's arm? No! He has to be perfect. The agony. ;)
Can it be attached? I sound a bit silly but you've woven a lot of angsty parts in this fic and I love them all, truly. It's exciting and the anticipation of what's to come is huge and it's all been so unexpected.
Great update, thanks for the jolt.
| jansails chapter 13 . 8/15/2011
Just when ExB start making progress with one another, in rides the Volturi, ever ready to wreak mayhem.
Bella's gift comes in handy.
| thepinktabby chapter 13 . 8/15/2011
Woo ... omg im so in to this fic. LOL I'll see you in september.. Whoa.. that's like a song or something. I love feral bella I think the talk she had with Jasper helped her cause well he's lived through a similar situation. I like that Lucy and Maria were mates. It makes sense.
Thanks for not killing Charlie cause yea that would have sucked.
until next time!
| maggiejoma chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
so Bella has been changed... and is not dead as Edward and all the Cullens believe...:)
| maggiejoma chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
| sandraev1 chapter 13 . 8/14/2011
Loved it! I wasn't expecting the voulturi to come. I hope they make it. Thanks
| Trickster22084 chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
Holy cow what an intense story. I love that your bringing the animal out of Bella keep it coming
| Luvtwismut chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
That chapter was brilliant! I love how far Bella has come. Pun intended. *giggles*
Thanks for writing!
| sandraev1 chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
She's back yay! Thanks