|Reviews for blown by the evening breeze|
| sidsaid chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Hahaha I loved this. And boy is Devyn a firecracker! haha
| iamaflawlesshumanbeing chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
This was awesomely epic Mad! Like, seriously. I know I don't RP with you guys but I love Devyn! She's a(i)myzhieing ;) I loved how you characterized Louis I love him (who doesn't). Anyway, great job Maddykins :)
| motherpucker chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Hi, Mad. This was really nice, dear, and I totally understand why you like DevLouis. Personally, they don't really do anything for me - *not* that I'm saying I ship SebDev! I'm not saying who I ship just yet. I'm going to keep you all on tenterhooks waiting, 'cause I' ;)
However, although they don't do anything for me, I may have got a little twinge - just a little one! - and went 'aw, they could be sweet together' at some point, so well done you. Well-written, as usual. Very funny. You're very good at these kind of fics, and you have a lovely, natural writing style. I think you got Devyn especially in character for someone who doesn't play her.
Still not into LouisDev, but I'll make an exception for this fic ('cause it made me 'nyawh' on a bad day). Love you, CCTriplet ;)
- Ella xXx
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
That was fantastic. :D
I loved it, Mad-O, and it was totally adorable. I might start shipping them as well. ;)
Great job! :)
| allisonarrgent chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
WHHHHYYYY, MAD? WHY?
So I'm sitting here wondering what to write in this review, because it might turn into a rant [which isn't necessarily a bad thing, yo].
Anyways, I'm glad you enjoyed writing Devyn, m'dear - I love RPing her so much, it's not even funny. The only major problem I had with her in-character in this was that all those times she said "Heck no," she would probably just say "Hell no," because she DGAF about who's listening. ;)
The whole "I dare you" thing was hilarious, I can totally see Devyn saying that to Louis every time he didn't want to do something. And they kissed. THEY KISSED DRUNK.
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?
I can't even fathom how that in that one moment, their kiss actually made me want to ship them. [Not admitting anything, for the record.] I almost had a fangirl moment there. And the aftermath of the kiss was brilliantly laid out, really. It's probably exactly how Devyn would react, except she'd be denying her feelings for him MUCH MORE and stuff. But it was all still really well-written.
And for some reason, I kept imagining Deepika as the cheating exgirlfriend. Does that make me evil? Probably. ;)
Alright, so to tell you the truth, I can actually see this happening on the RPG, only because you kept Louis and Devyn fairly in-character. HOWEVER, I can't make any promises, because as we've already told you, Becs and I can't force them to like each other. Haha.
I really liked this, Mad! It was fun to read, believe me. :)
| Aebbe chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Haha, I already know this is going to be a ramble not a review... ;)
So of course, I'm going to say there are lots of places here where Louis isn't quiiiiiite in character. For example, there would definitely have been a negative reaction to this statement: "Everyone's freaking in love with you and your Veela blood." Because that's exactly what he's afraid of.
Also, everyone seems to assume that Louis' innocence in terms of experience extends to his mind as well - they should read some of the dirty jokes he was making in the Hufflepuff Common Room (mostly about Damien and Aggy). And he loves breaking rules - he does it all the time.
But anyway, there are my automatic objections, now onto what I actually thought. I still thought it was hilarious, and great writing as usual! Considering that you don't play either character, I actually think you did really well at keeping them in character. I like how you just left Deepika out of the equation though... Unless she was the cheating girlfriend... ;)
(And I don't hate Louis/Devyn myself. I can't force him to fancy her though. ;))
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
So, um, Dev, hun, you let him call you DEVY? Priceless, Madizzle.
Louis, I had kiss the girl from little mermaid running through my head this entire fic ;)
Madz, I loved it. It was adorably amazing and a great way to show the pure epicness!