Reviews for The Jack Ripper in the Night
Scion of Madness chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
this iz unbelievibly awesome! keep it up! :)
12krokerbc1 chapter 2 . 8/6/2011
Hey Dude, I would find it funny if you placed the characters from the first or second left 4 dead into this! The survivors would think what the f**k and try to shoot Jack before Lucia jumps in front of him and tells them to chill out (I am new to this so give me some slack).
alexlion404 chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
dude this chapter is just the old chapter again
wolfnymph1 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
okay, seem to be two of the same chapter up. other then that,i'm looking forword to the rest.
Silverdragon98 chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
Cooooooool :D
noel taves chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I would love to read more of it
Jason Valdor chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
me thinky the innocent little girl's gonna die :P

good story. My advice? Work on the first-person fluency, you don't seem very practiced with it in general.

Looking forward to the next chapter.