|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| ho'okahialohaX018 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
oh shit. this just confirms it. i KNOW the manga is open-ended and i believe that arakawa-sama could TOTALLY DO ANOTHER STORY BASED OFF OF ROY. AND EVEN ED. AND AL'S JOURNEY AS WELL. OMG. ALKAHESTRY. IT'S STILL POSSIBLE.
ok i'm sorry i'm fangirling. it hurts. lol. but this was lovely. i love roy/ed bromance. it's perf.
| lotrprincess chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Great job! Interactions between Ed and Mustang can be really difficult to write while still keeping them in-character, but you do it professionally and creatively. Between you and Kristen Sharpe, I think my FMA fanfic experience is much more enjoyable than it would have been otherwise.
| S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This is a nice scene of Roy and Ed.
| ANIMELOVEDOLL chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
That was a wonderful, short story... It really depicted what would happen between the two of them, for me anyway! :D Thank you.
| BringingBackSocksWithSandals chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
i always like reading on what might have happened when ed quit the military
this one was really good