Reviews for Ume No Tsubasa The Wings of Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey well, glad that you're back to normal! and you finally updated! man i feel totally useless; haven't written a single WORD or drawn ANYTHING of note in the hols. nor have i finished all my work. *fully depressed~* ooh, make that ginran? and that blood-bomb splat message thing was SOOOOO funny in Vol 8; I remember reading it over and over again while laughing. cya Bookwormtiff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Aprillup! Wow it's been a while, but since I FINALLY finished it off at home, I have to say that I quite like this fic so far. The concept is very interesting, and I especially like the way the plot is slowly but surely developing; you've twined so many threads and questions within, giving out little hints to keep the reader guessing. Basically, it actually has a PLOT, which makes me envious (I suck at them, lol!). On another note... ICHIRUKI! 8D sooo cute! I love them! And finally, I just love those little mini-poems. They're amazing. (That last one was Aizen & Urahara, right? I want my prize, hehe...) How's that for a review? Upload that Hetalia fic soon, or face the consequences... :D Bookwormtiff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() been waiting for this chapter since forever! still loving it though ;) about that phrase though, i guess it means that people who have these great ideas, in their battles of pride others get caught into it...or something like that...i'm really bad at explaining things but i get it! XD cant wait for the next chapter!(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! this chapter was like seriously epic33 it had my favorite part in the whole series [[when ichigo gets his powers :D]] OMG OMG OMG HINAMORI IS A HOLLOW! I KNOW IT! i'm right aren't i? ;P HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY~ OMG YOU're 14? you're only 2 months older than me! Have i ever told you how much i LOVE your stories? You're now officially my model for becoming an awesome writer like you~ ;) cant wait until your update! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter! :) we sort of got an idea about Momo's scar... *stillwaiting* ;P ah yes, i believe this would be the time when i say, "Aizen's a Loser." ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() what does kibou mean? i don't much about the zanpakutos either " another nice chapter! looking forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yo aprilup (lol, such a funny nickname) i've been trying to review since yesterday but there was some issue with log in I really like your writing, like your style is so... gah no idea how to explain, pro i guess i feel like whenever i write in 3rd person i end up with so much she's and he's and i like the story line! but disfigured momo, T.T... so unfortunate... die aizen! you put so much effort into researching, like i have no idea how the kido spells go " *sigh* guess who i am! |
![]() ![]() I like your story! I hope you continue it soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story already(: the prologue really puts you on edge. cant wait for your update! :) |