|Reviews for One Man Army by Domysticated|
| winterstale chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
So bleak but gorgeously written! Love the twists and allusions to canon characterization and 've painted Jasper's interior landscape so specifically here I physically felt it. Love the risky choices you made and how the little details support this interpretation of the contest's theme told through Jasper and Maria's story. So well done in every way. Thanks for writing. I really enjoyed this!
| chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Awesome story, a great plot and you incorporated the characters very true to themselves into it!
Good luck for the contest!
| Twilight44 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I liked it.
| beegurl13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
This was good, I liked it. :) I like that it's Jasper and Maria, that's different. And I like that Alice wasn't his typical saving grace, like in most stories. I like that he's screwed up and twisted around over how Maria has treated him. that's good. :)
Nice job. :)