Reviews for Double Cross :original:
demigodishness11 chapter 8 . 8/3/2016
great story, can't wait for next chapter
The-Phandom-Queen chapter 8 . 7/27/2016
Where is the rest? What is the name of the other one?
Guest chapter 8 . 3/1/2016
Please update I like it
kurumakit chapter 8 . 1/17/2015
Love it update soon
theinternetruinedmylife chapter 6 . 5/22/2014
U are evil. THX 4 EVERYTHING!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/24/2014
You spelt Gaea wrong it's spelt Gaia
Guest chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
Where are you?
lovepercy21 chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
i like the story as it is but if you feel the need to change it then *sigh* go ahead it's your story anyways, but please try to continue this one! i love it!
BellaGrace7855 chapter 2 . 9/12/2012
"Always the same questions. 'Who are you? What am I doing here?'" Is it just me, or were you hinting at Victoria from Twilight, who said almost the same thing in the movie?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/7/2012
You know these tourters are not that bad But apart from that really good
darkhairandgreeneyes chapter 4 . 4/11/2012
Aww :'( poor Percy

I think you made a very good point about the whole peaceful-Titan-relatives like Calypso not being honoured, because I was thinking about that and how the gods practically ignored that request of Percy's...
CreativeUserNameForgotUserName chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
good job on the tone, its a lot like in the books.

I love the first sentence. Keep it in the revision some how!
Live.Love.Twix27 chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
Oh my gods. Yay.

I don't have much to comment on (other than I'm super happy and excited) so I'll just go read the prologue you've already got out.

(gods, how did I miss this?)

Thanks,

~Twix
smallmineharte chapter 9 . 10/15/2011
love it update too
relativelyhuman chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
The story was great! It's weird how much you appreciate a good torture story! Wow that last sentence sounded incredibly morbid! Your an amazing author so keep posting!
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