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Devil's Den chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Aw... So heart-warming-

Wait, ASH?!

What's that bastard doing in heaven?!
bookloverfair22 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
it's awesome
asdf chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
They all died? Wow, that really is sad.
The Timeless Clock chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Short and sweet. The writing that is here, is very nice. However, if you want it to be really good, I would reccommend making it longer. Really drag out the emotions, make people feel. But don't forget the surroundings, too. But, it was your choice to make it short and I think it has a nice effect, being short I mean. Apart from a few grammatical errors your writing flowed nicely.

Over all, good work and I guess making it longer isn't really a bad point (it's just something I would have done. But that's me and you're you so you don't have to listen if you don't want to.) Keep it up :)
Mainn chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Nicely done!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
awww tht sooo sad

but im glad forr alex
Little-dhamphir chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Huh, good idea. Just a little confused as to how K-unit and Tom passed away.