|Reviews for Five Nights|
| lucyv chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
| LaPetitRose chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
That was beautiful, the love between them is incredible amd you portrayed all the sexual tension and love perfectly. Lovely job.
| letsjustdance chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I found this through the 'single shot awards' website (via twitter, first)...anyway, I really enjoyed it. I love stories where Bella and Edward have a normal relationship (including sex)...I agree that SM was a little to 'prudish' with our couple...I mean, damn, she didn't even let him get to 2nd base..lol...anyway, cute story...thanks!
| 3diamonds chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Thanks for this :)
| shinzonx chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This was an awesome read, and felt totally canon.
| miaokuancha chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Oh my God this is just unbelievably beautiful.
Perfect, perfect character study of these two. Edward's voice is just perfect.
I feel her innocence yielding before me, but I do not mourn it.
Instead, I give her mine in return.
I flat out cried. In these two sentences you've captured the essence of their hearts and souls and this moment of first union. Just exquisite.
Thank you for writing and sharing this.
| overzealousbunny chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Oh lovely, this was UNBELIEVABLY hot out the wazoo of hotness!
Great writing as always! xo
| GLee68 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
absolutely breathtakingly stunningly perfect!
| Powered by 23 Kicks chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
...are my go-to-writer. You did these scene shots IN character, and not only fanned the flames, but didn't douse them completely just because Edward gave in. Because I know Edward never giving in is part of what keeps us all panting...I love to be kept wanting and waiting. But there's a limit.
And you show it so credibly here. You show Edward give in, but not giving up. And it makes me fall in love all over again.
So thanks. Times 23.
| SuperAsh chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Well done! *applauds* yes, these five nights really could have happened if only. :::Sighs::: I could really feel Edwards turmoil in this story. It was interesting to read about Bella's sexual frustrations from his self- depricating POV, how he turned it to her hate of him rather than the situation they found themselves in. I do enjoy reading about the self doubt that he is able to talk himself out of once he opens his eyes and sees her for who she really is rather than what his mind twists it to. I still love the story that these two are meant to be together. So sweet and pure.
Thank you for sharing your writings with all of us!
| onelilhopeful chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
This was ... simply stunning. Fuck. It feels wrong to debase this with an exclamation like that, but it's all I can come up with.
"The way she is so essential to this existence that now feels like a life."
| Saritadreaming chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
This is by far one of the best one shots I've ever had the pleasure to read. So beautifully written, and you captured Edward's 'voice' extremely well.
| LittleWing2 chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This was wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing.
| gkkstitch chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
W-w-w-wow! Loved how you paced this!
| NobodyButHim chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Great story! Very tasteful lemons. I love the emotion as well, especially the last night how Edward describes what the scent of Jacob on Bella does to him.
"You can undress me," I whisper. "It's all for you anyway." Caressing the skin above her hip, I make her shiver lightly. Only I'm not sure if it's a tremor born of words or touch or cold. "Whatever you want," I promise. "Take it. It's yours." Even more quietly, I breathe, "I'm yours."
Hottest few sentences ever *drool* ;)