Reviews for For a Sick Boy
Hikari Kamishiro chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
Wahhh~~~ Lenny~ you're too! Too innocent to be a sick one! *hugs him* I like the emotions of this story! XDDD kyaa~ not 'like' but 'LOVE' it! UP DATE~~~ :3
xXSanctusAvaritiaXx chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
*cries* Poor Tei. *cries*
xXSanctusAvaritiaXx chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
The narration kind of created the atmosphere where I and Len are seated back to back while I listen to him complain about how unfair love is. But there's this transparent wall between us that prevents me from helping him and solving his problem. It kinda makes me feel very sad. Very very sad. *sobs*
xXSanctusAvaritiaXx chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
Uh, yeah. It's scary, alright.

I like it so far, please continue!

So Len would you like to help with my math problems? *To hell with mathematics!*
xXSanctusAvaritiaXx chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
it's not distrubing though. I find it much 'life-like'. Even I would feel the same way if I happen to fall in love with my stupid *ehem... lovely... ehem* brother. Not a very pretty sight.
Chikanpo chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
Not enough emotion? Hah.

Wow, it's a miracle, Tei actually seems nice! Another great chapter

Nerumi H chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
Okay, I'll admit, I just floated aimlessly through the end of the chapter because I was crying :/ Reminding me of a certain suicidal friend of mine are you, Tei?

But I will return when I feel like being emotionally stable. Pffft.

For the last two chapters, things are getting darker, definetly. Especially with Len's fantasies...they're sort of..chilling, even more so with the ways you phrase everything. I love how you touch on real life situations like how society will still discriminate, and the labels of Normal. It makes Len a very complex character and you a very intruiging person. Your mind really travels, doesn't it :)

Maybe I will review better another time, but I'm tired and feel like hugging Tei (now that is a problem).
Campanella chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
Are you kidding me? There was so much emotion in this chapter. I can relate to Len. I didn't want to get bullied, and I just watch others get hurt. Yeah, stupid right?

Anyways, I feel bad for Tei. She's a really nice girl in this story, but yet jealousy took people over, which resulted in Tei being driven into a corner, until eventually, she died...

Now I feel so guilty. And weak I guess.

You know something funny. I try not to cry especially when I'm watching sad anime and stuff. So I start laughing XD I started laughing when I was watching Angel Beats! (which is really sad) :P

I love your stories! I think your stories are really unique :) This story made me read all your other vocaloid stories (lol sorry I only read vocaloid fanfictions XD;)
psychoticObserver chapter 4 . 4/14/2011
This is really sad...

but i love it.

Is that wrong?
psychoticObserver chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
Wow. Thats all i have to say.

This is really good
psychoticObserver chapter 2 . 4/14/2011
that kiss would have been so awkward...
psychoticObserver chapter 1 . 4/14/2011

This is really good.


The other fics with twincest make it all happy.

But if you were in love with your twin and people judged you for it, i doubt you'd be happy.
Pilpols chapter 3 . 4/14/2011
Len dont bite your fingernails !
Starshine333 chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
Aww poor Len :( It's sad to read all this from his POV...

But I guess I like this style of writing, it feels like Len is really speaking out from the words and is actually talking to you one on one. Interesting, update soon please~
Librarian00X chapter 3 . 4/12/2011

I'm oddly fascinated with this fanfiction. I've never really had a thing for the "blind omnipresent first-person" perspective, besides for my one story where it was necessary, but...hmm. This one really makes me stop and think a lot. About people.

I love the stories that make me think. Good work on that; I'm gonna fave this right now. I like it. *approvalface* b
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