Reviews for Well in Hand
Danny chapter 11 . 7/9
Excuse me, not trying to be rude but if Innner Sakura there, then where's Kyuubi
AnimeMango chapter 11 . 6/22
oh how I wish you would keep updating this story! I saw on your profile that in 2014 you said you would abandon all but one of them but this one is so good! I really really really like it and would love to see how it ends. if you do decide to get back to it eventually I'll be waiting here!
riiene chapter 11 . 5/26
this is so good...ㅂو i need more...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27
You deserved the pain Sasuke, as Naru deserves happiness.
Blitzstrahl chapter 8 . 3/25
She's been deriding old time line Sasuke for half a year if the timeline follows cannon. She's quasi dating Naruto, while "getting over" Sasuke as she goes. He shows up says im sorry and gets into her pants with no effort...dissapointing as all hell.
Konohamaya Uzumaki chapter 10 . 3/17
Oh how i loved reading this story! I wish you'd kept updating. I was dying to see Neji fail in the Chunin Exams and Hinata make it to the Third Exam. That would have shocked her father enough to give poor Hiashi a heart attack!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/8
Seems like Sakura is still like the useless fangirl emotionally.
Just because Sasuke shows a bit of contrition she is willing to spread her legs for him again. Considering that she is to some degree dating Naruto now, she's also cheating.

Basically I find her weak and that act made me lose respect for her. She should stick to her guns, after all Sasuke chose rebuilding his clan over her, so she shouldn't have absolved him at the end.

Come to think of it, why didn't future-Sasuke just use artificial insemination? Even in its crudest form (using something like a turkey baster), it should have a decent success rate. By not actually fucking the women he should have had a decent chance of keeping Sakura, though I guess that is explained away by his bitterness over not killing Itachi himself, so he reached a point where he actually wanted to hurt her.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/8
The power levels seem very inconsistent;
In one breath the author describe Skaura as being barely average as a genin, with the boys always mopping the floor with her in spars despite her future memories, and then suddenly she is so far beyond them that Sasuke couldn't touch her in spars and he had to team up with Naruto to have a chance.

It feels ironic to say that about a Naruto fic, but the author has watched too much anime and manga, I have always hated those sudden jumps in power, training takes time, and there is a limit to how much determination helps you in training.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/8
Teamwork is being wanked way too much, two genin should never be able to defeat a jounin, there is a limit to how much sheer determination can help, I hate that kind of shounen crap.
Of course Sakura isn't a real Jounin though she has the memories of one, but the idea that they could be any kind of threat to Itachi, or Orochimaru at this point is ludicrous, at best teamwork might help them escape more easily.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/8
ha'penny?
The Naruto verse uses the Ryō (one ryō is worth 10 yen)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8
I've noticed that every time cursive is used, the words get bunched up.
Needs editing.
HeyJoe0929 chapter 11 . 3/9
Aww. Too bad you haven't updated in years. I woul've loved to see how this ends...
Sol chapter 11 . 2/19
Is this over? It says the last update was in 2013, and here I am four years later wanting to read more... ;-;
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17
Holy hell, I love this story! The scene shifts like which the 2 mercenaries at the bar was wonderful, and also pretty much everything was great.
NatNicole chapter 8 . 1/13
Holy. Freakin'. Shtick. This Chapter is scary AWESOME!
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