Reviews for The Opportunity of Defeat
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Astounding piece!
Tenkasen chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Absolutely brilliant. I loved how even though Tim was becoming so detached and losing his morals, he still cared. Cared about his older brother, and by leaving a genius fallout plan to take himself out, technically all his friends as well. It was touching, bittersweet, and amazing. Well done.
ThisAccountNoLongerLives chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Wickedly awesome. That was great! I was confused at first about the absence of a plan for Dick, but it all made sense at the end. This just attest to the fact that Tim could never truly be evil! He's prepared everything so that he will always be defeated in that situation! Love this so much! Thanks!
APasserby chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Oh Wow.

I liked that story a lot.

It's soooo... I dunno. Fascinating, sad, understandable and shocking as well. No idea, how to describe it.

Cr1mson5 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Whoa. That was frickin' INCREDIBLE! Am I right in thinking that Tim let Dick kill him? That's kind of what it sounds like.

Anyway...awesome story! Keep writing!
7 Dollar Word chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
I'm somewhere between wow and holy ...

Because Tim's decent into madness would be nothing but controlled, even if he couldn't control the madness.

And his plan for himself, just brilliant.