Reviews for The Bar in the Maid
erinskaya chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
only Brennan: "You're supposed to be using our cover names, Booth. I'm Jena, you're Frank." She whispered.

this is gonna be fun, and a wonderful snack from the undercover fairy.
MiseryMaker chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Bring it on!

Booth checking his fly completely cracked me up! Love that they're undercover! I'm hooked on this one already!
NCISaddict77 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
And now I'm intriuged(sp?). Wonderful start
jenlovesbones chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
my very own "funshot!" I love, so far. It seems the reviews already are on board with the idea of an undercover story (that may or may not end up under covers). :D

Excellent undercover names, btw.

This was a winner: "Perhaps instead of displaying your male prowess to the clientele, it might be wise to keep your eyes open." Brennan's voice was deep with sarcasm, and Booth's head snapped in her direction. He then looked down to see if his fly was open."

And like driving, of course Brennan's a skilled drink maker.

I'm a happy girl. Thank you, thank you! :)
mendenbar chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
But you didn't start off "It was a dark and stormy night..." Okay, so you didn't have too but it feels like it is going to be a Clue-type story.
Frankie707 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Oh and undercover fic. So cool. And we're off to a great start. :)
angiebc chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
ooooh fun )
aadams00 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Wherever this takes us, it's sure to be a sweet ride! I have to chuckle at the idea of Bones being a waitress...best undercover idea I've read in a while. Interesting start to this mystery...I for one, can't wait!
bones35 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I love undercover stories and given your past stories, we are in for a treat!
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