Reviews for Do You Believe in Magic?
SilverCyanide5689 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I like it. It has a really good idea, like...holding onto the child like imagination, but I feel it lacks substance. Maybe instead of "Have you ever tried?" Try something along the lines of "Don't you remember doing such things as a kid?" If that makes any sense, that way it gives the people you are trying to target the sense of imagination they used to have, at least that's what I think you're trying to get across here. :)