Reviews for Hiding in Plain Sight
Elvenwannabe chapter 1 . 8/27/2014 are such a bad boy..aren't you? xD Though...I can't say I blame him. Very nice story.
TStrife chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
being next to the kids felt weird to me, but being quiet is a huge turn on! good story!
Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Hehehe looks like cloud and Tifa are horny! XD you should make a sora ad kairi lemon from kingdom hearts!
BladeMaster44 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I loved how you blended the humor without losing the mood. very well written
Great chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Hilarious ending, very clever! Love the detail too (;
Frosty Dagger chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Brilliant! I enjoyed this quite a bit
3 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I love love love your stories with Tifa and Cloud. They are the best I've seen so far!
Alia92 chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
lol Cloud :) the last part was the best. He's soo devious.
compa16 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Face palm
Strifegirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
lol this was funny and kinky xD I loved it! :3 nice job! x3
x chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Loved it. Very good. :)
sakR9 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Haha! I hope the kids are still asleep~~ :D

I think this was really good, a great build up to the steamy scene with the setting of the sand storm. A mention of the other characters but no needless dialogue with them, great~

Just the last line, Cloud said, "let's try this again in the tomorrow night!" And it should be 'let's try this again tomorrow night!"

:) Otherwise it was good! Thanks for writing it!
ayannaaki chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Great story! Very nice _
Lehst chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
xD oh this was funny and really sexy. I like how you portrayed Cloud and Tifa (meaning I think they are pretty well true to character). and the whole scene was pretty realistic for two people with, eheh, "forced celibacy". The sandstorm is the perfect reasoning for their predicament, well done.