Reviews for Hokage of Konoha
H lover chapter 22 . 9/23/2015
Make it a bit more naruhina and finsh up thd meeting in a happy way thats all
Guest chapter 20 . 9/16/2015
NH fana are funny. Bashing Sakura so that NH will make some sense? Hinata should be knocked to for being Naruto's satellite.
camelykonas chapter 5 . 7/15/2015
Where is shino? Is he dead in this story or what?
Days chapter 3 . 11/3/2014
Allright, even if Sakura is the assistant, she has no right to fill out the paperwork on her own. Even if she does it just to be nice.

It's the small details that irritates me, and the pairing came way too fast.
Days chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
Sure they are his friends, but why did Neji call him Naruto-san? even if he uses honorifics, Neji would probably use -sama.

Same for the rest. And why are you using Rokudaime when they're in Konoha? Use Hokage.
samy.reales1 chapter 22 . 7/27/2014
Please come back! I love it!
Guest chapter 22 . 7/17/2014
larryjc chapter 22 . 5/9/2014
I like the story. Though it went off plot. I though it was about NH, but relationships seem to be secondary. So I see it as how sasuke got back to the village's trust. I haven't read something like that before. Your use of honorifics is sort of wrong. -kun is affectionate, so it is funny to see almost everyone saying 'naruto-kun'. -san will be more appropriate. I could be wrong though. Just talking from how it is popularly written.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/13/2014
Are you going to finish this story it is really good and I really hope u complete it please please do thank you for all you've done so far as well u are a very talented writer
Christina chapter 22 . 9/27/2013
Please continue the story! I have been reading it all night and I don't want it to end! Thank you! :D
Guest chapter 22 . 8/27/2013
when the next chapter will come
Narutochic chapter 22 . 7/27/2013
OMG! Pleeeease are you aliiive?! this is the most realistic fanfic i've ever read my most favorite, atleast committ to ur story
highstar chapter 22 . 7/27/2013
Well to me you are great with the way your writing this story but haveing just plain taking just wouldn't fit right after all why on earth would the kage be calm about sasuke's presence, like the raikage he should be against it all the way but that's just what I think, your a great writer you actually are the reason I'm trying fanfiction so thank you
Lovein chapter 22 . 7/14/2013
Definitely have naruto step in and definitely have something unexpected
FreddieD123 chapter 15 . 6/20/2013
Great chapter keep up the good work but I think you should finish the one about kabuto and the naruto zombie
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