Reviews for MFEO
oguz22 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Can't wait to read more.
aswan86 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
i like cant wait for more
laraspain chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Ohh you scared me there for a minute! This chapter is pretty sad. Are you sure it won't be too drama filled? I love your writing and a new story sounds great
artistic wonder chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I'm so excited that you two are doing another story!
sarahstasia chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This says Romance/ I'm banking on that haha

Was one of your inspirations for this Sleepless in Seattle? Just wondering, because the character Jessica in that movie uses MFEO alot, and it's about a man and son who lost their wife/mother. But either way, I can't wait, I love the last fic you two collaborated on
avidreader69 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This reminds me of one of my favorite movies! ;)

Okay, I am nuts because I do love the story, but I will throw it out love the second time around less special because it's not the one and only? Just wondering what others thought, I have never been in that situation so I wonder how others feel about it/
VampDog chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
A great start!
Ellachanted chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Hmmm. Edward & Jacob aren't going to be fighting over Bella are they? Because that is going to be weird now lol.

Ok, if you promise no angst and funny author notes I'm in :)
TessLouise chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I just keep telling myself, "this is labeled as Romance/Humor" so, of course, they're not talking about Bella now with the plan to tell the whole story in retrospect. That wouldn't be Romance/Humor! Ah, the things I do to get me through the day! :D

Really glad ya'll have another story!
JayNahNah chapter 1 . 4/6/2011

Hmmmm...this first chapter was very powerful. I initially thought it was bpov & they were talking about Renee but then I stopped, realized I was wrong & started again once I figured out it was EPOV & maybe it was Bella who died.

However, names weren't used so I may be mistaken again...a little angst is good but Bella dying isn't.

Looking forward to seeing more.
rachelin chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Gulp...loved LiMB, so I am looking forward to this one too-but...I kept looking up at the description to see that it did indeed read romance/humor! Glad you clarified the angst will tamed. Also hoping the obituary reads Tanya or Jessica. Don't want to think of Bella dying already! Can't wait to see what goodies are coming up!
Mireads chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Reads like it will be a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
nitareality chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I'm hooked. Shocker.

3 you ladies.
LSU15 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I have put this story on alert. I'm not sure to make of it yet, but I will see where it goes. Not sure who his wife is, but evidentally not Bella so I'll give it a try.
EMCxo chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Nobody puts Zefron in a corner! He's young, he has stamina!

*shudders and feels the need for a shower*

Ok, so we can ASSUME that it is not Bella in the coffin, right? Cause this chapter made me all emo.

Maybe he was married to Shelby in Steel Magnolias. Her favorite color was pink. ;)

Happy to see the writing stylings of CosmoandMarvar back in my box. All is right in the world again.


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