Reviews for Dark Water
riversongandthedoctor chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
So bloody close.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
I don't want to experience that feeling... no way... *shivered*
Poor Ianto... I kind of notice when Ian sound hesitant.
I can't swim like him! And the feeling like Ianto had must be VERY ABSOLUTELY SCARY!

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Jack forgot when Ianto said don't let go!

*shivered*

Oh... god... scary...

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Btw, nice ending! ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Thankyou. DottyWho.
VoicesInTheWind chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
This is good. I like this. The dialogue is terrific, and had me chuckling in several places -

"And it doesn't sound like a Porsche at all." xD

I enjoyed this very much.

-Voices
CraZyPshyChoLadY chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I laughed so hard at that last line.

I sympathise Ianto, I can't swim either and my best friend had to save me from drowning once... yeah that embarrassing.

Loved it!

Gwin D
akawho chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Ha! So Ianto doen't know everything after all. Good story.
chironsgirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
"You may now squish your boyfriend." Snerksnerksnerksnerk! Like Jack needs to be told!

XOXOXO
Village-Mystic chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Plausible and nicely dramatized.
RhianaStar chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Loved the suspense... and happy ending
TWIantoJones chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Jack pouted. "How come you always look at me when you say that to Ianto?"

"Huh," Owen replied sarcastically. "I wonder why." He stepped back from Ianto. "I'm done. You may now squish your boyfriend."

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My fave part! I can so see this happening! Great story, love how you don't have them spend ages telling Ianto off because they didn't know. Great team story!
whitecrossgirl chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
that was really good but a very close call for Ianto :)
Eleanor Harkness-Jones chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Poor Ianto, loved the story "make that two" lol!
ladyjane6313 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Loved this story! Typical Jack jumping before he's seen what's in front of him. And typical Ianto for not being more up front! Well done.