|Reviews for The Fox and the Rabbit|
| bravenclawesome chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
I like how the beginning and the end were the same, it kind of brought the whole thing to a nice close, and also reflected on how all the stuff that went on in between was all unspoken, which made it all the more poignant, in a sense. Really great job!
I write Merlin stories too, I hope you take a look at mine (and review?) sometime :) This story gets a favourite from me!
| satomika chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
sometimes, i'm thinking that with all the drama between arthur and merlin, they'd kiss each other in the end...
it just gives me weird thoughts...
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
That was really great! Good story!
| IceCreamDoodle13 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Brilliant story, in my opinion. You really captured their friendship, and friendship in general. Very well written :)
| Shere'Lifsil chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Though a beautiful story set at a wonderful time, sunset. It's not your best. Don't get me wrong I like it, I like the subject, but it just doesn't touch me in the way I would like it to touch me, in my heart. So, though wonderfully written, with a beautiful subject, there is something missing. Sorry.
It's still good though.
Keep writing this stuff, maybe next time I'll be able to give you something more concrete, or, more likely, maybe you'll blow my mind.
Good Luck Writing,
| zammierox chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
lol at first when I read the summary I thought everybody, literally, fell asleep D However, this was an amazingly fantastic "pleasant surprise". I love how you wrote this and I just love the fic in general. D
| Bailieboro chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
This was refreshing, beautifully written, simple but deep. Much appreciated...
Just one little suggestion, I believe the correct preposition in the following phrase should be 'in each other's company', not 'at each other's company'
| Kitty O chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I love it. I love the way you described their friendship, they were just there... And they liked wach other even when they didn't. And that's true friendship; it's friendship so deep that it's family. Merlin and Arthur's lives may stink if you just think about all that danger, but they have a friend like many people only wish for.
Those two rock. THe bromance. The bromance is too much for me...
| Emachinescat chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Aw, this was really good! :)