Reviews for The Ollivanders at War
Toaofwriting chapter 37 . 3/8
Beautiful, well-written, well-characterized, story. Great job.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/4/2016
I loved this story, the characters, watching a muggle in the magical. World
Phantom Dennis chapter 8 . 12/29/2015
Ah, Augusta Longbottom. I suspect that the main reason she wasn't the one facing Bellatrix in the final battle because there would be no suspense about the outcome.
Phantom Dennis chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
Technically, the Happy Squirrel card was created by Greg Daniels so he would be the one with knowledge the Magical World. Which means other clues to the magical world would not just be in Classic Simpsons episodes but also KING OF THE HILL and PARKS & REC. What if the Pawnee civil servants were thinly disguised members of the American Bureau of Magic or whatever it's called. Does this means there's also a Fiancé card?
Phantom Dennis chapter 2 . 12/29/2015
Fell is actually a fairly balanced character and seems to be almost designed reflect positive, negative, and ambiguous personal experiences with religion.
Phantom Dennis chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Amusingly right now, Snape seems to be one set up the big damn hero, which given his canonical status as the BDV in the book is quite ironic. I notice you didn't promise not to upset the continuity of Deathly Hallows. It'll be trickier to keep continuity with that story.
Hijokugei chapter 37 . 9/8/2012
Brilliant work, m'dear! I look forward to anything else that you may present!
Hijokugei chapter 36 . 9/3/2012
It's a little bitter, yeah. Not gonna lie. The effect is significant enough to throw the reader, I feel, but it's also understandable from Calliope's perspective, given her lack of information on the matter. Perhaps if she took the chance to talk to Harry about stuff...?
Hijokugei chapter 34 . 8/9/2012
Oh it is a VERY good thing that Great Britain is allied with the United States. I imagine that the US equivalent of the DMLE or Hit Wizards is much more... vigorous in its execution of its orders than the British DMLE.
Hijokugei chapter 32 . 6/9/2012
If you do that thing where everything seems fine, and then all the shit hits the fan, I will be very very VERY displeased.
randomgenius chapter 23 . 5/5/2012
Crap, Linus has Asclepius's wand, doesn't he? The just can't catch a break...
Hijokugei chapter 29 . 4/14/2012
That. That was SO freaky at the end.
xxx666BagatelleIris666xxx chapter 1 . 4/14/2012

a word of avidce. u shud mak u story more interesting by makin it more goffick and puttin more sex into it cuz itz rlly boring now. i cudnt get past the first chatpter.
Hijokugei chapter 28 . 4/7/2012

*dramatic orchestral number*
Hijokugei chapter 26 . 3/9/2012

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