Reviews for Goodbye, Fredo
LilianClassic chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Amazing short story you wrote here. Really captured Michael to me! Nice job :)
Anne Oying chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Wow, this is amazing, short but amazing!

I could see the scene in my head while reading this, well done! :D
Dan Sickles chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
This is a short piece but you do a great job in bringing out the emotion and also in illustrating Michael's central dilemma. His father taught him that the punishment for anyone who betrays the family must be swift and merciless - yet murdering Fredo is something his father would never have done.

Great job, and I hope you do a longer piece sometime soon!