Reviews for The Ryukaki Connection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh hey, um, I really enjoy your fanfic, and I was wondering if it's okay if I were to record myself reading the chapters and putting it up on youtube? I'm kind of bored at the moment... XD Um, if it's not okay with you then I just won't do it. Doesn't really matter either way. But yeah, I just thought it would be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really awesome story! It's nice to see things from Kayd's perspective. And, in case you weren't aware, there's an actual section (under "Games") for "Ben Drowned" fanfics. :p You could probably put the story there for more viewers and such. Can't wait for an update! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very good! It sure was an interesting read. I do look forward to more. The one thing you might want to concider is a beta-reader. You seem to make only very small mistakes, and a beta can easily fix that. As always I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() /SPAZZ Holy shit this is... Damn. Jad. I don't even know, man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh, I know that feeling. Get up, stumble to bathroom to get ready, go to school, get home, internet until bed. Yippie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how things are just...creepy. The tone adds to it. -nods- (Sorry for choppy review, preoccupied.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked how you incorperated that into the end. Didn't really expect it so soon, not that I'm complaining at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...and I'm instantly reminded of my first night in my new place, when I pirated off of a connection called Ben's Wireless Network. I lul'd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks great, so far! So much fanfiction about Jad, so little of Kayd... Looking forward to the next one. |