Oh hey, um, I really enjoy your fanfic, and I was wondering if it's okay if I were to record myself reading the chapters and putting it up on youtube? I'm kind of bored at the moment... XD

Um, if it's not okay with you then I just won't do it. Doesn't really matter either way. But yeah, I just thought it would be fun.

This is a really awesome story! It's nice to see things from Kayd's perspective.

And, in case you weren't aware, there's an actual section (under "Games") for "Ben Drowned" fanfics. :p You could probably put the story there for more viewers and such.

Can't wait for an update! :D

Wow, very good! It sure was an interesting read. I do look forward to more. The one thing you might want to concider is a beta-reader. You seem to make only very small mistakes, and a beta can easily fix that. As always I look forward to more!

/SPAZZ Holy shit this is... Damn. Jad. I don't even know, man.

Ohhh, I know that feeling. Get up, stumble to bathroom to get ready, go to school, get home, internet until bed. Yippie.

I like how things are just...creepy. The tone adds to it. -nods- (Sorry for choppy review, preoccupied.)

I liked how you incorperated that into the end. Didn't really expect it so soon, not that I'm complaining at all.

...and I'm instantly reminded of my first night in my new place, when I pirated off of a connection called Ben's Wireless Network.

I lul'd.

This looks great, so far! So much fanfiction about Jad, so little of Kayd... Looking forward to the next one.