Reviews for So It Begins
emgalvan chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
Great chapter, you warned me about the need for a cold shower after reading it...that was HOT! I'm looking forward to seeing how Bella reveals her past to Edward. Keep up the good work...
imlovinfanfic chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
i love this story. i can only imagine edward's reaction to bella telling him about charlie. i know he's going to go pyscho. damn, when alice and rose find out about bella's man they are going to freak. they didn't even get to see his fine ass at the club, huh? i can just see their faces when they meet the man who has swept their bestfriend off her feet.
stacieard chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
again another excellent chapter. can you tell me how often you will update. i cant wait to see what happens with this story. keep up the great writing! until next time.
Shortbritches85 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
I am loving this story so far! I can't wait to see how Bella and Edward react to each other's pasts!
stacieard chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
im really enjoying this story so far. i cant wait to see what you have in store for them. keep up the great writing!
motherbeatrice chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
too hot to handle, need cold shower fast. whew...

I need one of these Edwards.

Lovely story, ah waiting for more...
lilmstran chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
pmk kelly chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
loved that chapter
pmk kelly chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
really like this story
Savory chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
"I ran my tongue over her clit, her juices flowing into my mouth, as a ripe fruit, upon the first bite." Ok the visual of that made the ice cream cone I was holding in my hand melt. Damn that was sexy as hell! Bravo!

So looking forward to more!
Savory chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
Ok so I am not a speed reader or anything like that, I read these earlier but was unable to review at the time because of well you know ISSUES!

Holy smokes Pornward is as hot as Georgia asphalt on a July day but really sweet too!
Savory chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Very sexy and to the point from the get go! Love it!

Looking forward to more!
albadolores chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
mmmmm this virginbella, was virgin phisically, because mentally damnnn, she's not shy at all, so we start the storie, so hot and lemony, and all, so what's gonna happen monday when they start working ?
busymommy chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
love the mix of unadulterated sex and absolute sweetness!
busymommy chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
HELL! I am so glad I havent taken a shower yet, I'd need another one after that!
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