Reviews for So It Begins
polly000 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
great chapter
deedee cullen chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Bella's story is so sad. I feel so bad but Im glad that she has Edward now. I just hope she doesnt run when he tells her his secert. I loved the italian btw.
Cullen Confection chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
I love when Edward speaks another language. Thanks for the candy cig!

motherbeatrice chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
holy sh*#...



taking a cold shower now
Butterfly Betty chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Really looking forward to watching Charlie get his...
stacieard chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
im so loving this story. i cant wait to see how everything plays out. keep up the excellent writing! until next time.
gemma loves edward chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
Finally I was able to read this chapter lol. God I hate fanfiction sometimes :(

Loved this chapter please update soon D love gem
imlovinfanfic chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
i kinda hope they do something crazy like eloping. that would be just perfect!
jdc0630 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
PRETTY FUCKING GOOD...I have always wanted to read something involving the mafia...something a little different than "The Godfather" series. They held too much drama with all the *contracts* put out on people, the blood...but I did love the closeness of the family.

This is going to be a very interesting read...

I can only make one suggestion...JUST A SUGGESTION...slow things' down a "little" bit between them. There could be a slower growing of affection between them...the opening of their hearts to each other. Please don't take my suggestion as an insult...I truly love the story so far & can hardly wait to see where this goes. I would fucking love it if it were happening to me...& yes, I do believe in love at first sight.

I only have one more suggestion...& that is at the end of the chapters give us some kind of idea as to when there will be a posting of the next chapter...some kind of idea...cause I will be anxiously waiting for the next, & the next & the next, & etc...

Very Damn Good Story.

Thank you for the good read...can hardly wait for "MORE".

Jamie Crabtree

Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
*SQUEALS* Finally! I finally got the link to work babe! ok, its 9 in the morning here in the uk and this was the first thing i did this morning. i just had to read it and thank-god i did! wow, i loved it babe :-)

Tammy xxxxx
lvtwilight09 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
loved this chapter. I totally cried when Bella told Edward about Charlie, and had a total awww moment when I read what he had planned for her. I just hope she handles finding out about him being in the mafia well.
Minerva77 chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
First, I love you...

Second, kick ass playlist.. Music and writing kinda go hand in hand.. Crossfade and Skittet Rock!

Thirdly, I enjoy your author's notes as much as the story. You never fail to make me smile ( I think that's why I love ya so dang much)

And finally, this chapter, as always is awesome. Bella's nightmares were very intense and you done a great job in bringing that out for the readers..

I could say a million things about the "hanky panky" but one word comes to mind *Feckin' Hot* okay two words..

I love you (again) and can not wait for the next chapter.. In both stories BTW, this one and IBTH..



P.S Just 9 more days til' our Girl's Night Out (Hell to the yeah), I can not wait!
emgalvan chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
Great chapter, you warned me about the need for a cold shower after reading it...that was HOT! I'm looking forward to seeing how Bella reveals her past to Edward. Keep up the good work...
imlovinfanfic chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
i love this story. i can only imagine edward's reaction to bella telling him about charlie. i know he's going to go pyscho. damn, when alice and rose find out about bella's man they are going to freak. they didn't even get to see his fine ass at the club, huh? i can just see their faces when they meet the man who has swept their bestfriend off her feet.
stacieard chapter 3 . 4/12/2011
again another excellent chapter. can you tell me how often you will update. i cant wait to see what happens with this story. keep up the great writing! until next time.
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