Reviews for So It Begins
albadolores chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
woooooooo , a sweet cherry pop, at the first chapter hehehehehehe, love it, and i think is going great, this Mafward, and this abusedbella, ,Edward with all his power, and Bella with the pain of his abusive dad, . and with The bitches help, Rosalice, is gonna be a great storie...
sogian chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
OMG! LOVED IT! This Edward is so great! He is so sweet with Bella but only with her... He is the mafia boss after all! Eveyone will do as he says! He will find Renee! YEAH! That would be great for Bella but once he found out what her life was he'ss going to be so mad...! It's amazing that they already falling for each other and he dreams their life together...! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! When Bella will tell him about her past? He is right that he must be patient but she can trust him...
bean2011 chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
I love far sooooo goooood :) cant wait to see were u take the story and to find out more about them. This is great

polly000 chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
love it
Minerva77 chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
I think my favorite part is were they're gazing at the stars, too sweet.

Oh and of course the magic that is Edward Cullen's tongue c(: That

was pretty awesome... As always GREAT CHAPTER! I may not have

the guts to write lemons just yet, but by damn I do enjoy reading 'em. And you my dear - deliver some good lemons :)

Love you too dang much...

daughterofartemis86 chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
I love this story! Its gorgeous! Please keep the tone and feel exactly the same! I love how much Edward loves her and how he treats her! I want to see more of him treating her the way she deserves!
gemma loves edward chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
One word - AMAZING- :)
Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
I could so see edward with kids :)!

Is it possible to be addicted to this story already? HELL YES!

Tammy xxx
Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
O.M.G, how the hell you do you write this good babe? i swear i was gasping by the end!


Tammy x
deedee cullen chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
eeeekkkkk They are just so cute together. I dont think Edward is Falling I think he has fallen in love with her already. I love it
Twilight'sPuppetMaster chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Oh holy FUCK! amazing first chapter and I can't wait to get to the next one!
twithish chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
Can not wait for nexr chapter ...
Jackson Leigh chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
O my..I likey very much. Great story and so looking for more chapters.
lvtwilight09 chapter 3 . 4/10/2011
Absolutely loved it! I think I'd kill for some time in that hot tub with Edward. Cant wait for the next chapter!
bloodangel78 chapter 3 . 4/10/2011
great chapter, i cannot wait for bella to tell Edward about her past. He wad to cute in this chapter;)
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