Reviews for Do Want
TamaChi-Neko chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
I literally drooling reading this fic. Its DAMN good ! You don't have a continues for it?
akage girl chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
OMG that shit was HOT. I started blushing too while reading this and then i thought "omg what will my family think about me if they catch me reading this". You missed some details but i liked it any way w
Bunny-Fwuffy-Ears chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
DELICIOUS! XD
This is REALLY good but plz don't rush too much! just a suggestion :D
MI-CHAN66 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
O-Oh my...I actually found myself blushing at this. a-and my mother is asking me what i'm reading! D:
Xxcup-noodlexX chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
ohoho~ that was some hot smexin'! good job!
DanceInFire chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
oww Hibiya you!

"Delic and thrown Hibiya over his shoulder... And had sex with him on his shoulder?" made me lol so much, but yeah I had to reread a few times to see if I missed the part where he throws him to the bed or something xD

Still hot ;)
blackwingsgreeneyes chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Oh Y-yes! Role-play! *O*
Shizuo Senseijima chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I liked the concept and everything, but in your story you skipped a few detailed parts.

Like where was Hibiya as he masterbated?

Where did the magazine go?

Delic and thrown Hibiya over his shoulder... And had sex with him on his shoulder?

Also when had Delic thrust inside Hibiya? All of a sudden they just started going at it?

You seemed to miss a lot of chunks out of the story, only focusing namely on the sex than the details themselves. My suggestion is to read back over the story, fill in the parts missing. Other than that your story was very good for a first time in so long. Good luck in your future works.