Reviews for Remember Me
AriaxCiel chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
Hey! I have read "return" "return:the deleted scene" and this one! Ur doing a marvolous job! Ive never heard of the game but after reading it i liked the pairing but mainly in return! I hope that a sequal comes along! Also i had an idea for a story between them but its up 2 u wheather or not u wanna hear it! Anyways good job and keep up the good work
AriaxCiel chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
Hey! I have read "return" "return:the deleted scene" and this one! Ur doing a marvolous job! Ive never heard of the game but after reading it i liked the pairing but mainly in return! I hope that a sequal comes along! Also i had an idea for a story between them but its up 2 u wheather or not u wanna hear it! Anyways good job and keep up the good work
K. A. Raith chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
It's been... what, one year? I've been lurking in other fandom and almost forgot about LR.

Dave's kind of OOC, but then again, it's been so long so I might not be the best person to judge characterizations for this fandom.
Art of the Artichoke chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Interesting AU so far. I have a suggestion about Rush's heart. If he were actually put on a transplant list it would create a small amount of hope about his condition. Plenty of people die before getting an available heart. Even if the heart transplant is successful there is a slight chance the body will reject the organ :(

Hope makes deaths all the more sad...of course Rush being sick is already a recipe for sad. I think Dave should give him a prescription of a hug.
MsSupreme chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
wow dave really is out of charater :) but i like it, the way youve made him in this, you can still see the soft side to him XD its really good :) update soon please XD
yin13147 chapter 2 . 4/8/2011
That was fast! You're a good and a fast writer. That is very admirable. I know that next chapter will leave me hanging, so I'll root for you. And also, My Fantasy is already posted. :D
yin13147 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Man that is very good for a starter! His Generals there are sure strict on him and man I pity his depression. I can't wait for the next chapter which I know will be super AWESOME! :D