I'm really liking this fic, although is acting weird over the last few days.

The story is progressing nicely, rarely do I like fics with OC, but this one is working for me thus far.

I'm interested with what's going on with San, was her panic due to guilt, or is she still struggling with her identity, or just that she did THAT with a girl that isn't Brittany?

Anyway, looking forward to more.

I'm guessing that because this is a Santana Brittany Fiction you're gonna get Elinor Santana to break up, but please don't. I actually love the fact that they're together. Because Elinor is such a great person it would seem as if Brittany was stealing Santana back from Elinor when she didn't want her in the first place because of Artie..

P.s. please update soon :)

Why, I do believe this is the first time I've read sexy time with an OC.

What is up with Santana though? Fist she kisses and dashes then she sleeps with Elinor and seems scared about it? I'm very intrigued. I really want to know what is going on. Only time will tell when the info will be released. Makes me coming back for more.

Again, great update and can't wait for more.

- Griffnix

Why did Santana leave? Is she still uncomfortable with her sexuality? A shame. I really like Elinor too. You mentioned new characters so maybe if she doesn't work out, there could be someone else for Santana. I kinda like the idea of Santana going out with women because no one meets their true love after the first date. Fingers crossed that she ends up with an OC. Also, thanks for the longer chapters. It was great.

- Griffnix

I gotta say I'm enjoying Eltana. It's interesting to see Santana unsure of herself and out of her element. You've developed their relationship believably, especially the end there with Santana running away. I'm interested to see what will happen next, and thrilled to see longer chapters!

I really like this story. The chapters are short but you still manage to pack a lot of emotion into it. I think you've captured Santana well, and I'm really liking Elinor.

I usually don't read stories that have an average of less than 1000 words per chapter but I was intrigued with the OFC premise of this story. It's interesting and I like the new character but the chapters ar too short. Just when things get interesting it ends.

As much as I would like to see Santana end up with an original character, I don't think think that will happen in this story. The long road to me seems like it leads to Brittana land. It could be about Santana's love in general but people usually don't write about the OC getting the girl in the end. It would make a nice twist if Santana ended up with a new girl, but again, it rarely happens.

Also, why do I get the feeling that the girl in in the car is pregnant? It would explain why she is in such a rush to get to her destination (the hospital).

Anyway, I hope you update soon (with longer chapters) and Santana/OFC for the win (please?)

- Griffnix

This is a good series, you have obviously put a lot of effort to develop your OC - good job. I wish the chpts were longer, but then I usually do .. keep up the good work!

I actually REALLY like this! Please update soon!

Like the story so far. Can't wait for more.

really enjoying this! Please update soon!