|Reviews for Gnawing Hunger|
| Enzonia chapter 10 . 6/13/2012
I have really liked it so far, but I have one issue, this chapter was almost exactly like the real one, what with the spunk and all. Also, the little girl scoring high!
| Captain.Daisy.Adrianna.Grey chapter 50 . 4/2/2012
this was awesome! i was hooked at chapter one, and my mother had to literally take my computer away for dinner. now... i shall go read the sequel. :)
| LoveIsBlindness chapter 20 . 2/29/2012
Loved the chapters so far. Although Kara is bloody annoying and vain. I know you are not reading my reviews for this as you have left Fanfiction (insert sad face) so I won't be reviewing that much now.
| Avy Kaye chapter 21 . 2/22/2012
this sucks for
them, now doesn't
| DarknessSeeps chapter 15 . 2/9/2012
Hahaha! I found this chapter pretty funny!
Also, I love the title of the chapter XD 'Oh Deer' _
aww, Kara kissed Dral XD
Well, I think that was clever of them to prepend they were meant to kill the deer and that it's not a mistake.
Although when Kara said - "Well I can't see why we needed to catch a stupid deer anyway; we should be looking for other tributes." - and then she thought that 'Now people will be thinking it was our plan all along.' Well, erm, that doesn't really make any sense. She was saying that they should be hunting Tributes and not a Deer.
Anyway, great chapter XD
| DarknessSeeps chapter 14 . 2/9/2012
Dral is just lovely XD
I wonder how Kara can just tease about killing with Dral... Maybe she's a pyshco XD
OMG! Did she just kill a Mockingjay? Meeh...
| DarknessSeeps chapter 13 . 2/9/2012
hmm, short chapter. But, well, if they are short then they are quick to read XD
Also, just a note, Maybe you should tone down your paragraphs. They are getting bigger as I read on.
I'm just impressed with Kara's reaction to her initial kill. It is quite realistic.
I seriously adore the last line of this chapter. For some strange reason I quite like it when there is a sentence in a story like this 'I, [insert main character's name], blah blah'.
| DarknessSeeps chapter 12 . 2/9/2012
I loved the start of this chapter. I also love how she stares down at her hands and ponder if they will become murderer hands XD
eee! Soo we have got to the bloodbath XD
| DarknessSeeps chapter 11 . 2/9/2012
Well... To be honest, Kara really annoyed me in this chapter :/
When she was going on about how horrible the other girls look, I was just like stop being a bitch! Oh, and shouldn't Precious be from District One because that's where they have the names like hers, in District Two it would be a harder, vicious name.
The reason why I'm readint this is because of your amazing writing, Vivian and Dral XD
Hmm, I actually don't see any difference between Kara and this Clara.
Wow, what a bitch Kara was for thinking that of Vivian. I mean, her father butchered her whole family, so I don't blame Vivian... I feel so much sympathy for Vivian :(
| DarknessSeeps chapter 10 . 2/9/2012
Hey, I'm back to reading this :)
Good chapter! Although, I was a bit miffed when Kara got a ten. It's a LOT alike to Katniss' story :/ That they both are better than everybody else... But either way I like Katniss and Kara still.
The ending with Dral is so cute XD
Humpt... Why does Kara look so perfect all the time?
| Cometas Por El Cielo chapter 25 . 1/31/2012
It's admirable that you ask for help and advice for your writing in the A/N. It shows that you're open to concrit, which is good. I openly ask for it too in my fics.
I think Martha-Rose's death was the most gruesome so far. I truthfully started to tear up. Best chapter yet.
I'm afraid I have to go to school and can't get one more in. Sorry :(
| Cometas Por El Cielo chapter 24 . 1/31/2012
Of course Kara's not going to die.
| Cometas Por El Cielo chapter 23 . 1/31/2012
I'm so sad now.
| Cometas Por El Cielo chapter 22 . 1/30/2012
O.o Plot twist to the max!
Kara's fault her mom is dead? Meep. She doesn't seem that close to her mom anyway, so...not feeling toooo bad for her.
| Cometas Por El Cielo chapter 21 . 1/30/2012
Wtf. No sun? O.o