Reviews for Natural
LilithL2 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
WOW...
that was hard...
congratulations for writing about such a difficult hard topic and doing it so well.
:)
Cold Flame96 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Ouch. This hurt.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Great story I really loved it.
BuzBeeMags chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
OMG! this was not what I was expecting, but it was still really good!
got me emotional and that is always an good thing for a writer to do
mangagirl64 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
awwww, so sentimental though I wish I say Burt's reaction to finding out that Kurt was molested. Its a good oneshot.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Can you please continue this story?
It's so good and has great potential.
And I really want it to continue
I really want to see confrontation with ryerson and having Kurt tell someone or mOre detail on what exactly happened with ryerson and Kurt and why he blames himself
martyrinthemaking chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Congratulations. You made me weep.
Great writing. Such angst! Mr. Shue was awesome in this.
I thought the overall pace of the story was good in that it didn't feel rushed, but my one suggestion would be to not make the molester Sandy Ryerson; just because whenever I think about his face and voice it makes me want to laugh and killed the angsty mood for a moment.
Rori Potter chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Brilliant story!
I'm home chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Really great story. I was in tears by the end. Done majestically with talent and you handled the issue with knowledge, wisdom, and grace. I wish there were more stories that send this message about this subject.
Lorelei-elf chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
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soratanaka chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This was actually very well written. Great job!
MissiYoung chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I know there's a lot of joking about PedoWill, but here Shue manned the f up and protected his kids. Bonus points to him; he gets teacher of the year, a Camero, and hell I'll get him a damn Bond Girl! And he clocked the predatory gay! Awesome fic, thanks so much for sharing!
StormsInNeverland chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
You wrote the awkwardness so well...gosh my toes were positively curling with anxiety in my socks as I read this.

Impressive.

Over and out.
evil older sister chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
That was very good. It was implied during the first episode that while Sandy Ryerson was a creep Rachel got him falsly fired for having relations with a student who was then transfered, but I have always had a few scenes written in my head where he was guilty just not with that student. It would almost be interesting to see what the rest of the glee club's reaction to finding out about this is, particularly Rachel who kind of inadvertantly stopped the abuse.
Niamh the Vargie chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This is a fantastically good story. I love the way that everyone reacted, and I think that this is just what Will would do. You barely need that warning at the top, I think that this is probably the most realistic reaction to sexual abuse that I've ever read. Great great story.
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