|Reviews for Natural|
| LegendaryBritinKinlor chapter 1 . 8/23
Wow this was rather disturbing but very good. I'm amazed by how you wrote Will because frankly he usually drives me up a wall in fan fiction. You really took a horrifying idea and made it very very good. Reading stuff like this sometimes is triggering for me but not this. In fact I read the end of this with a big grin on my face love the idea that Will broke Ryerson's jaw!
| Byakko Loki chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
*sobs hysterically while praising your amazingly awesome writing skills*
| LilithL2 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
that was hard...
congratulations for writing about such a difficult hard topic and doing it so well.
| Cold Flame96 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Ouch. This hurt.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Great story I really loved it.
| BuzBeeMags chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
OMG! this was not what I was expecting, but it was still really good!
got me emotional and that is always an good thing for a writer to do
| mangagirl64 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
awwww, so sentimental though I wish I say Burt's reaction to finding out that Kurt was molested. Its a good oneshot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Can you please continue this story?
It's so good and has great potential.
And I really want it to continue
I really want to see confrontation with ryerson and having Kurt tell someone or mOre detail on what exactly happened with ryerson and Kurt and why he blames himself
| martyrinthemaking chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Congratulations. You made me weep.
Great writing. Such angst! Mr. Shue was awesome in this.
I thought the overall pace of the story was good in that it didn't feel rushed, but my one suggestion would be to not make the molester Sandy Ryerson; just because whenever I think about his face and voice it makes me want to laugh and killed the angsty mood for a moment.
| Rori Potter chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
| I'm home chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Really great story. I was in tears by the end. Done majestically with talent and you handled the issue with knowledge, wisdom, and grace. I wish there were more stories that send this message about this subject.
| Lorelei-elf chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
| soratanaka chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
This was actually very well written. Great job!
| MissiYoung chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I know there's a lot of joking about PedoWill, but here Shue manned the f up and protected his kids. Bonus points to him; he gets teacher of the year, a Camero, and hell I'll get him a damn Bond Girl! And he clocked the predatory gay! Awesome fic, thanks so much for sharing!
| StormsInNeverland chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
You wrote the awkwardness so well...gosh my toes were positively curling with anxiety in my socks as I read this.
Over and out.