Reviews for The Closing Shift
9foxgrl chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
OMG! ADD MORE PLEASE!
UndyingSins chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
lol I may have only read the first chapter so far, but I'm loving this story and I would love to read more.

That leads me to wonder, why would Lovi have Lud's phone number if he hates Lud? .

*slips off to read next chapter*

UndyingSins
Hikari Heartache chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Hahaha I was wondering when Poland was going to show up!

Could it be that you work at Macy's or when you grow up you want to work at a Macy's lol
Hikari Heartache chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Lmao Macy's? That's amazing lol
LesstheHero chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
I love it

Please Continue

Hey, Canada has to be there, anyway. Then you have to put it MORE.
RishiGenki chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
A ha haha! I love it, I love it. If I have anything to suggust, it's that maybe you should put the Italian in italicsit would make me less confused that way

Anyway, so I really really liked it! I can't wait to see what else you come up with! favorites

Ciao

Rishi
Ms. Scouting chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Now that Romano found out...

Oh man. Good luck, America!

I like the whole recession thing. It was a nice touch. And I'm glad that Italy and Germany didn't just walk up, say hi, and leave. That would've been boring, because I love the allies and axis interacting randomly. (Especially in a Macy's...)