Reviews for Story Time
Rodmeister chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
I agree with Raiining here, but I did like the part about the flower in the book. This story reminded me of how happy a place Shop Around the Corner really was.
Hatori's Melted Snow chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
oh i really liked that. good job!
Sorkin's Gal Friday chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
“No, Annabel, is my niece” the man answered.

“Your niece?” she wondered.

“My niece, right, Aunt Annabel?” he asked the little girl.

You made a mistake. Annabelle is Joe's AUNT. not his niece. He is her NEPHEW.
Raiining chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
interesting .. I don't quite see the point of this story though. why take out that part of the movie?
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
So good I love how you used Kathleen's perspective
If you decide to be a writer when you grow up I know you'll succeed
I loved every minute of reading it
Mystic _-
njc-hotchick chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
ok what kind of lanuguege is this in no fence but it was pretty good i guess
miss emtoo chapter 1 . 10/24/2002
Your beginning was great! I really liked how you talked about the flower in the book. Though, personally, I think you should have twisted the ending more away from the movie - but you're the arteeest :P
LissaLapin chapter 1 . 4/1/2002
Should say Annabel is my aunt, not niece.. other then that.. Kinda blah.

Is this your dad?” Kathleen asked the young girl.

“No, Annabel, is my niece” the man answered.

“Your niece?” she wondered.

“My niece, right, Aunt Annabel?” he asked the little girl.
Little Comet chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
Oh, you gotta write more!

Long live the lollipops!
SAngel chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
Keep going!