Reviews for When Opportunity Knocks
Piebald46 chapter 1 . 1/12
Thanks for letting me know it was plagiarized guys! It's been so long since I've been on this site. My other story Of Morals and Temptations must have been removed. /
Stephannie1014 chapter 1 . 1/12
Great story! Sorry it got plagiarized! Love your words!
Louisa taylor chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Edward-Control Freak Pussy ass vampire
Carlisle-He is Bella's mate
sileya chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Wow. Scorching!
Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Wow, I am never, never a fan of cheating but this was so HOT that I was literally transfixed! It had me actually hoping that they would go home and catch Edward & Esme in the act so that they could end up together in the end. Please, please, please give us more of this awesomeness.. please!? ;o)
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
OMFC! That was the sexiest Carlisle ever. I read you o/s twice cause I so like your Carlisle. He is so a DILF that I wished lived next door to me lol. You are such a great writer!

Kathy :D
Ebony Bluebell chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Brilliant! I reckon that you should do a follow on, of when she has been changed, when the situation arises :)
Ebony xxx
Jasper-Damon's Princess chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
I love it :D
I kinda wish there was more. It would be interesting to see where this story could of gone if it wasnt a one-shot.
Inlovewithjazz chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
I'd always choose Carlisle over Eddy any day! Hot little romp!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Loved it! Wonder if edward and esme are at it too?
springbreakers chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Holy shit... THIS story has made start shipping Edward and Bella romantically and sexually. I had only read one or two smut fanfics with them prior to this but holy shit. I have never been so turned on in my life. You also didn't make it OOC for the most part (even the occasional dirty talk from Carlisle).. because I can actually imagine Bella being pent up with sexual frustration and doing certain things described (not that I have before reading this, but this fanfic has made me see a whole new light lol). I know you said it's trampy or whatever, but I really could feel their compatibility both inside and outside the sexual things.
I love this fanfic so so much. You're a wonderful writer. I hope to see more from you in the future!
loopylou992 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
That was certainly a hot and steamy little number and I LOVED it!
sandy.morganlopez chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Awesome writing...sucked that they didn't end up together though. :(
FinnMac chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
I love Bellisle too, and I loved this!
TwistedNeiviv chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Well now. Rawr.
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