Reviews for Sprained
Guest chapter 2 . 4/9
*fans self* wow this was amazing. Great writing and I love how you portrayed them both.
The ending was great, though if you ever came back to this I'd definitely love to read more!
Thanks for sharing! *dabs nosebleed*
MyLittleSister chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
KkChibiChop chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
I LOVED this! Amazing, wonderful smut! :3
account-is-terminated1221 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Holy fuck. I just found this fic in my favorites list and decided to reread it and it's still just as amazing! XD Fantastic smut and in character (to me at least!) L & Light. Love it love it love it...
Doctor Crow chapter 2 . 3/28/2013

I think I'm the voyeur type. Yaoi pairings. Sadly, for my sweetie, I'm a prude who won't tumble until after marriage.
spinninground chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
I have to say that you have a real gift fr the art of lemon. I hope that's benefiting you in some way, because you shiuld not let that go to waste. ; It's kind of strange, but a lot of times I read lemons for the setup, then skip or skim the smexin'. I think it's the same sort of urge that keeps people reading porn ttles regardless of whether the content is interesting. I couldn't look away from yours though, even though it was a (well framed) PWP. So goodbye, and thanks for all the citrus!
SmileyfaceGurl chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I've read this before I had a fanfiction account and now that I do I'll add you to my fave list of authors because I loved this!
ulqui's-girl chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
** OMG! 00
ulqui's-girl chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
OMG! XD Awesome!
introspective ramble chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! And I was wondering... Do you think you'll ever continue this?
Algea chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
You know how desperate I was for some hot porn lately, I'm sure I told you.))) So as I haven't found any relief in Star Trek fandom (yet, mind you, I'm still trying) I returned to Sprained. Ah, what a delight it is, I can't thank you enough for this wonderful piece of delightfully arousing doubleL porn, especially considering recent events in your other story. I'm very happy for them, shagging each other shamelessly and I'm very happy for myself being able to read your stories every time I need reassurance or just being in need of some plainly wonderful writing. Thanks so much again!
MoMoPocky chapter 2 . 11/30/2011
*cleans blood from nose* This story rocks! I like the small including of Mells and Matty, my favorite characters, and pervy L. I personally like the ending and think it should be left alone! Awesomesauce story!
xxdarkxxalicexx chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
omg. the vibrator was pure genius! XD i wanna read more! /puppy dog eyes
Truewman chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
I reallly love your way of writing

Especially with the always so serious characters of Death note !

I loved this kind of AU and fits the two men perfectly and you also capture L's way of speaking!

I read both DN fics you made and I PRAY you make more soon!

Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
wow. That was particularly fun to read. I though that you would do more with the chocolate but it was great. I only wish that you would do more with this line to smutfic's. Well, if you do then you have my entire support /
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